CLASS ANNOUNCEMENTS

CLASS ANNOUNCEMENTS

Wednesday, December 1, 2010

Last Day of Class

Today we all completed our SERT test. After, we had a little pot luck to celebrate our last day of class, as well as Dr. Rivera's birthday. It's so amazing how time flies by so fast and the semester is actually over. I'm glad I had the opportunity to meet all of you, and I wish you all luck in your final composition, as well as your SERT test. I'm crossing my fingers we all made it through. If not, at least myself, I hope I can have Dr. Rivera for my instructor again if I don't make it. Otherwise, I hope to see you guys in EN110. Take care and good luck in all your future endeavors. Dr. Rivera, thank you for all your guidance and support this semester. Without you, I don't think I would have made it through this semester.

LAST DAY!

Hey everyone,
Oh my I can't believe this is our last day, at least were leaving each other with a little get farewell party. I hope everyone enjoyed this semester, I know I had. SEE YOU ALL AROUND THE CAMPUS!

Farewell, bye bye.
Take care.

-Crystal

Good bye

This is it guys and girls, the last day of class. Well, for this class anyways, we will just have to wait and see if we passed!. I think that we all did good. Wishing each and everyone of you a Happy Holidays from me to you and your family and a happy new year.
peace out

Wednesday, December 1, 2010

Hey guys well that time has come and after today we won't be seeing each other in class anymore, but instead the campus grounds. I hope that everyone here today has done a great job on 2 of the finals, and get to advance to EN110. I hope that everyone will have a great Merry Christmas and A Happy New Year. I hope to see a few familiar faces for EN110. Good luck to all and see you in the spring. Oh hay!

Farewell

I am so happy this is the last day. I did enjoy our evenings together, but everything must come to an end. I hope we all move on to our next English test. Everyone enjoy the food, because I know I will. I have not eaten dinner. I also hope to be employed soon.
Good night everyone

December 01,2010 LAST DAY OF CLASS

YeaY, last day of school. Though I'm pretty scared for the SERT, I will try my best. I pray that we all pass this class. Good Luck Classmates.

The last day

I had fun this semester, but I'm not planning on repeating this course. I want to pass this course guy let's do our best in the exam good luck guys.

Crying.

I'm crying because I was cutting onions. Hehe I kid. I can't believe this is the last time meeting up and the last time posting an entry for this blog. This was my first ever experience on blogging, and it was rather odd, yet fun. I hope everyone passes, because I know we all worked hard. Hopefully we'll see you guys at EN110. I'm pretty early today because I had to picked up food from my work for you guys. FOR YOU GUYS. I really hope I pass so I can clear for EN110. Thats about it, you guys take care. Peace

-Batman

Wednesday, November 24, 2010

Oh Yea

I forgot if anyone does not have family or friends to visit. My house is an open invitation to all. There will be plenty of food.

I am out of recovery and back to work...

Hey everyone if you would like to know ( which you probably don't) I was sick last week and I've been on recovery since then nothing serious, just enough to get me out of class. Well I am back and not so ready to get back to work. So far since all of my essays are done I have been slacking off. Now that the topics are out I can become motivated to pass the final and move on to EN110. Well so far I have been brainstorming a subtopics for each main topic that was given. Hopefully by next week Sunday I have 3 essays down and ready to kick the final essay in the butt on Monday. Well that is all for now. Later and have a Happy Thanksgiving everyone!

Well Well

Hello,
Well we are so close. I am so excited. I am looking forward to having some free time in the evening to start Zhumba again, but it will be short lived. I already started to register for my classes and they fall once again on the same nights as Zhumba. I guess I should start that P90X that has been sitting on my shelf for months then. I am ready for the essays. I feel pretty confident now, but I was a little uncertain last week. I had to make myself focus and relax. I think it has worked. I really hope I am not going to jinx myself after writing this post. I feel I have the worst luck at time. Is everyone going to bring something to eat next week for Dr. Rivera's birthday? I think maybe we should get a list or something together if we want to go ahead with the party. I am always up for some food. I hope everyone has a great Turkey day tommorow speaking of food. Personally I am going to be glad when it is over and done with. When you have to do all the cooking and it is gone and you look at all the dishes in fifteen minutes it is a little nerve wrecking. Good night everyone and be safe.
Evening everyone,
Just finish editing two out of the three FINALS topic. My topic for both is High school and Drinking age. I hope I memorize and pass the essay part of the FINAL. I need to get to studying plus memorizing again. Well, I'm just waiting on one of my good friends to give me a thumps up on the correction I made in my essay. Thanks to her I think my essay is going to be ready for the FINALS, now just to memorize. I hate memorizing.
Well, Have a good night rest for MONDAY'S ESSAY FINAL!
GOOD LUCK!
From my family to yours.

Teenage Dream

Good evening everyone and Happy Pre-Thanksgiving day. I am saying that because I will not see any of you tomorrow (unless we are actually related, in which hello relatives) because I will be spending it with my family and labtop (the labtop is not part of the family anymore but we still welcome him at the house time to time). It's actually my day off tomorrow so it'll be really nice for once to not have school and work. Today we did a student survey about mygcc. I like mygcc, I just feel like it's need to be upgraded. The program reminds me of my mail.com days. I don't know if anyone still remember that site since everyone is so "hot" these days. I am currently doing outlines for the three topics. I find it easier to do an essay with an outline due to it laying down the infrastructure of what I want to write. I wouldn't mind having topics one and two, but topic three is a real thinker. Hopefully we'd get atleast topics one or two to choose from. Thats all for now folks. Shamagloo!

Busy in my Eng Class

Arived in class just about 7:30 before my 8-930pm class start, just enough time to my English class folder and organize it. Right after I did m Eng folder oganizing I did a in class survey that has been pass on to all the students in class. Finaly my 8 till 9 has begun , atleast I do have to worry about being late becuase I am siting here in writting my blog Oh I mean this blog! EVERYONE in class HAPPY THANGING if do not meet up with you tommorro thursday 25th. Oh I almost forgot to mention EAT hardy tommorro, and do not forget Monday.

November 24, 2010

The Final Composition is coming up, so I need to start writing my three essays. Also our exam is coming up, it's so stressing. I hope I pass so I won't have to take this class again. I have to focus on my essays and study harder. Good Luck EveryOne....

Practice for the final composition

This semester is almost with only a few days left I need to at least finish writing all the three essay for next meeting's final composition.

Topics

Did you guys and gals choose a topic. I really like topic three but it is not a guarantee that this topic will be chosen. The other two are good too but topic three is the one I want to write about. Anyhow, I would like to take this time to wish everyone a Happy Thanksgiving and a advanced Happy Holidays to you all. Hope your Holidays are good and wish you all the best of the new year.
peace out

Monday, November 22, 2010

My chosen Topic

My choice of topic will be on Number#1- Discuss your favorite past time, which actuly mean telling one of my most exciting moment before today.

Finals!

Hey everyone,
We just got our final topic, and I'm not as scared as I was before. That's a relief, other than that the only thing I'm afraid or is the SERT! ahhh. Study study study.
I can't believe we only have a week left. Oh Gosh. I hope I pass....

Good luck to everyone.

HP7

Yeah thats right, I watched Harry Potter during the midnight premiere. The movie was awesome but in return I only had 5 hours of sleep. Anything for those mudbloods ey? Well back to today. I really don't know where everyone is right now, but I hope they come by wednesday to know whats up. Dr. Rivera gave us our final three essay topics and I was actually suprised. I was expecting more complex topics that would give me a headache, but i'd take this. It was more general that I think everyone will not have so much of a difficult writing, as to making it great enough to pass the class. I will be working on the three topics these weekend. I really need to start buckling down. Good luck to all of you and may the force be with you. Shamagloo!

Neovember 22, 2010

Today we have to finish our essays. I'm finally done with my free writing essay. I'm worry about the Final Composition. I have to work harder. I also have to study harder if I want to pass my SERT. It's so stressing thinking about it, but I got to have faith if I want to pass this class.

The topics

I am really having a hard time focusing on anything this evening. I dont normally let personal issues affectmy work, but it is overwhelming for me right now. I need to go home and curl up in bed with my husband. My kids are always sleeping when I get home so I cant cuddle with them. I guess I am going to be writing all week. I keep telling myself to focus, but my brain is not listening. Stupid brain. I am ready to get all of this over with so it will be one less thing to worry about.

Final essay

I'm will start writing my final essay. Only three more classes left for this semester, I didn't even notice the days passing by ahaah ^^,

Hello Monday

Hello everyone,
Well we are almost finished with the semester. I am excited because I am ready to start new classes. We got our topic results and I am confident that I will do well. I hope so atleast. I am praying for a better week. Last week was not kind to me at all. I am just very anxious about all the upcoming events. My husband is also waiting to find out if he made his advancement. I pray he did, but they cut advancement rates. I am crossing everything because he has worked so hard for this test. I hope everyone is prepared for the sert and essay. I wish all of you the best of luck.

Last class

Hey everyone I know I didn't attend last class, November 17. It was my sisters birthday and I wanted to celebrate with the family, because we all went out to eat. What happen during class?
Well anyway, I'm here now. =]

Saturday, November 20, 2010

Previous SERT

Dear EN100W Students,

I've been advised by Toni from the English Dept. that the students who passed a previous SERT exam are J.G. and C.U.  She will provide me with another update soon.    

For those of you have taken the official SERT (not the practice SERT) before, keep in mind that your previous SERT scores are voided if they are more than 2 years old.

Good luck as you continue to prepare for the SERT and final composition exam!

Best regards,
Dr. Rivera   

Wednesday, November 17, 2010

Deathly Hallows

My topic titles are usually the ones that are in my head them moment I type my title so that explains that. Today feels empty. I don't know what it is, but it certaintly feels empty. Just doing our En100w prompt essay. These essays topics are pretty difficult, because it's hard to related to one. I hope the final essay topics are easier to relate to, so I can do my research easily. Hope the best luck of to all you guys. I really want to pass this class.

Wednesday

Schools going to end soon and its so stressing. Not much people came in today, I guess, because of the rain. I was absent last class so I was a bit confused with what we were suppose to do, but I'm on track now. I just need to finish my cover pages for my essays and I'm done :)

November 17,2010

I really have to do my Prompt Essay, because I know that I won't have time tomorrow to finish it. I also still have to review for our SERT, I'm so stressed right now. Luckily my Mom bought me a medicine called "Memo Plus", it's a medicine that helps your memory and mind function right, I hope it works. But of course I won't depend on it 100%, I'll try to bring my book at work so I can study.

My fifth essay and the next one

I'm finishing my fifth essay but the next one is kind a hard. The essay about the prompt, I don't really know what to write on that essay.

Sick again....

There must be something brewing in the air again or maybe it's just the weather but my kids & I are sick again. Hating this feeling with finals & the semester coming to an end and I can't help being out again. If someone could keep me updated as to what we are doing I'd greatly appreciate it. Have a good weekend and hope to see you all on Monday.

Monday, November 15, 2010

Where Was I?

Good evening everyone. I apoligize for not making Wednesday classes last week for I was abucted by aliens and had to miss class...not. I had to go to Chamorro Village for some class work. I know it sounded like I skipped class, but I wasn't. I was actually doing some class work inspecting the different food vendors and what not. During the time I was away though, I finished my essay and Krystal just peer edited it. I will be praying and studying for my cert test and hopefully we all pass the final composition and the SERT test. As much as I like seeing all you guys every mondays and wednesday, I want to get my generals out of the way. Generals out equal less stress and more major classes. Thats about it for today. Have a great night and continue working for the starts or the sun or mars or Agat.

YEAH

Well today was an okay day in my favorite class. All we had to do was write another essay to practice for the final SERT that is coming up real soon. But we have done a lot of writing in this class so we all should be ready for that test, but I do have to say there is something about the word TEST that makes me a little nervous. I don't know if that is just me. Over all I think that I am ready so that is all that counts to me. So I will see you guys on Wednesday for another episode of the BLOG.
peace out

FINALS AND SCARED

Tonight I have a massive headache on thinking on what to write. Oh my I'm really scared on what to write. My brain isn't cooperating with me. Its to a point were I'm totally blank and I forgot how to write essays. I feel like I'm back in high school having to take a dual enrollment at U.O.G and had to take the placement test. The description on how we have to choose one topic out of three to write about.
Oh gosh I'm really scared. Even with the Prompt Question that was given tonight for a practice. I'm having a hard time because of my mind is totally blank.
Well, I'm just going to sleep on it so i can have an idea on what to write about.
Wish me LUCK. And GOOD LUCK to you as well.

Countdown

I am glad we are nearing the end of our semester. I have enjoyed the class, but I am ready to move on. I was unaware of a free writing essay. I started the one for tonight and had over a page into my writing and I erased it by accident. I am frustrated now and I do not want to continue tonight. Today has been a grueling day. I am tired and I want to curl up in my bed and disappear for a day. I need a vacation away from reality for just a little while. Has anyone registered for next semester. I am trying to, but I am waiting on my transcripts to come in from Florida. Does anyone have some chocolate? I am hungry and craving a milky way. I suppose I have rambled enough for tonight. I hope everyone does amazing on our upcoming tests.

November 15,2010

Today we have to do another essay, A Prompt Essay about "The Insular Empire". This is hard because I have no idea what to write. I'm not even done with my free writing essay, my mind isn't functioning right, maybe I'm just exhausted from work. Hopefully I'll finish it this Wednesday. And I'll also study for our upcoming SERT Test.

November 15, 2010

After tonight's discussion regarding the final composition and SERT test, I suddenly got a massive headache. I find it difficult to write when given an essay prompt rather picking a topic of choice and writing about it. I'm glad to hear though that we will be given the topics ahead of time so we can do our research on what it is we want to write about. I hope the topics are interesting. I find it easier to write when it is a topic of interest. I want to wish my classmates luck on your final composition as well as your SERT test.

new essay

The new essay is kind of hard for me, because I don't really have any idea the Insular Empire. I've read a blog about it, but it doesn't really give that much information.

Early!!

So to today I went to class early to get my essay done. I won't be showing up for my regular class time due to a car ride situation. But I finished up my essay, so that's great I won't have to worry about that one. Now I just got to focus and prepare for the upcoming final in December. Later guys have a goodnight and I'll be seeing you back in class in regular class hours. Oh hay!

Wednesday, November 10, 2010

Been out for awhile

Been out for awhile due to medical reason. Looking at you guy's blog's most of you are talking about spelling game, grammar . Don't mind if you gave me a few tip'son how to start it, thank's

Finally

Finally submitted my final draft of my persuasive paper. What a relief now I can breathe a bit before the final essay. Well, tonight I finished my paper then started to work on vocabulary online that was difficult but fun and challenging. Good night see you all Monday.

The weekend!!

The weekend is here for some of us. Oh hay! Time to get stuff done, if I couldn't do it in class. Today all I did was make my cover pages for each of my essays. I just received my last essay, which my argumentative. I'm just going to finish that up when I get home. As I finished my cover pages I continued my work in class by practicing for the SERT. I didn't know how long it takes, but I think I did enough for today. Well have a good weekend everybody, be safe!

Vocabulary Building Online

The Vocabulary is not that hard. The problem is you have sto use ten or more vocabulary word to make a short essay.

It is almost over

What's going on everyone, can you guys believe that the semester is almost over? But I don't really know anyone in this class. I know maybe one or two of the people that are in this class. Oh well there is always next semester. I am going to be sad when the semester is over (laughing). Today I finally got my essay done, now I can just study for the final composition. That is all for today till we meet again on Monday next week.
peace out

Time to hit the books!

Hello c:
As soon as I got inside the classroom, I signed in and Dr. Rivera told me to read what's on the board, and I just found out that we had to do another essay, but our choice. So, I'm doing an expository essay on " Teens and Jobs". I'm just doing research for now so by next class I should be done with it. I just found out more information on the final. (I'm so scared) Gosh, I have this huge feeling I'm going to fail the essay part. Men, I'm so terrified. I'm going to be working my brain to hard.
Now its time to really HIT the books 10times harder.

okay, Have a nice weekend. No classes tomorrow.

Bye bye c:

November 10, 2010

Review Time! We have to study for our upcoming final exam "SERT". I'm scared because I don't feel like I'm ready, but I'll try my best. I'm almost done with my vocabulary activity, so hopefully I will have more time to study for the upcoming exam. I'm also finish with my Persuasive Essay, so that's a good thing. Good luck everyone!

November 10, 2010

This evening I started off class with creating coversheets for my essays. Next, I started on the vocabulary building online activity, and was getting frustrated because I had some many errors. Most of the vocabulary words in this activity I have never even heard before, and to think this is 9th-12th grade games. I'm having difficulty picking a topic for the words I got incorrect, so I decided to take a break and do an entry for my blog this evening. I wonder if anyone has the same problem as me. Good luck to you all!

Today

Today was a really good day. I did some the vocabulary on the grade game website. Some of those words was really hard, and I had to write almost all of it but that's okay. I had lots of fun today! Take care all of you and drive home safely.

Hello Wednesday and Goodbye

Hello,
I had a great week, and I hope everyone else did as well. I got a new baby on Monday. His name is Grunt. We got him from GAIN and I am not sure of what mix he is, but I think he is adorable. They said he was a mix between Shae Pei and some kind of bull dog. I have finished all my papers except our final reflection and I am going to start on it this evening. I also need to make cover sheets for all of my essays. I hope everyone is coming along or finished. I cant wait till next semester. I am ready for new challenges. Good Luck everyone and have a wonderful evening.

Monday, November 8, 2010

It could have been better

Class was alright today. We had to continue with the usual work, our argumentative, blog, and review for the sert test. I felt rushed when Crystal told me the paper was due today. I had help over the weekend with my argumentative essay. I was glad to get that done over the weekend because I took my time in class doing other assignments. All I had to do was get my peer review, revise it, then send it to Dr. Rivera for more revising. Hopefully by tonight I'll be done. Looks like my time's up see you later.

Due.. OMG

Oh my gosh.... I walked in to class tonight and Dr. Rivera asked if I submitted my essay didn't realize that it was due tonight so I continued to work on my essay however I don't feel it's ready for submission. I guess this will be my first essay that I will submit LATE. Like the old saying goes there's a first to everything. On the contrary, I'm hoping to finally pass this class for it is the one class I need to achieve my certificate.

Another cold day in class.

Even if I sat on the end of the row, I was still cold to make it worse I forgot my jacket. I forgot to blog in last class, didn't really do much, because the power went out, although I still checked if we had class and ended up waiting 30 minutes to check if the power would go on. After Dr. Matilda let us go. I'm finally done with my 4th essay so thats out of my way now I have to review for the sert test.

Time Skip

I swear I didn't see you guys last class. Haha. Last class was weird because there was no lights. Kind of creepy since we're in a school and anything goes. Well just been writing my last essay then off to review and study for the SERT test. I really hope to pass the final essay and the SERT test. I'm kind of scared but who isn't. Well the people who are not taking the test are not scared but that's not the point. Wish best of luck to all of you out there. Peace 2

October 08, 2010

Today we just have to continue our Persuasive Essay. I just finish mailing mine to Dr. Matilda Rivera. I'm kind a scared for our SERT because I fell like I'm not ready yet, but I'll try my best to review and hopefully past. Maybe I'll start reviewing next week.

November 8, 2010

I'm sorry I missed class last Monday because I was out sick. Thanks Crystal for doing a peer review for my fourth essay. Unfortunately due to the island wide power outage we were unable to have class last Wednesday. I wasn't sure if it was indeed islandwide, but when I passed the campus it was dark, so I just turned around and went back home. Thank goodness I was able to forward my fourth essay to Dr. Rivera this evening for final review. I sure hope I get a good feedback on my final essay. I hope all of you are doing well.

fourth essay

I finally finished my fourth essay. It took me about 5 hours to finish my essay yesterday, but I think it's still kind a short. It's only a three page essay because my topic is kind a hard.

Hello c:

Hi!
Well, it's only 7:55p.m. I know, early right? ah aha. Well there's about 6 people including me right now. Well lets get down to business, I just emailed my essay I'm just waiting for it to be check by Dr. Rivera. I have nothing else to do but to wait, because I already finish with the vocabulary building activity and the one or two paragraph for the mistake that we had.

Okay, see you guys on Monday next week.
Bye c:






8:32pm
I received essay by Dr. Rivera and I just turned it in. I'm done for the night. ah aha.
I just need to study for the SERT!

Bye, again. c:

Power Outage

On this day we stayed in class for thirty minutes. We chatted with one another and left when it hit 8:00.

Sunday, November 7, 2010

oh my goodness

I'm doing my essay toady because I didn't work on it last meeting because of the black out. T.T
now I'm having a problem on what to write on my essay I'm running out of idea after writing three pages. ugu...............

Wednesday, November 3, 2010

early class

Hey, I attend the early class yesterday, at first it was peaceful everything was going so well, but then the crazy power and glitches started happening which made the class more difficult to handle for most of us, as for me not really I didn't get to post my blog so that was just the meaningless part, but other than that the other pretty seem to have it hard on them because some was working on their fourth essay. Well, atleast you section 13(our class) didn't have class, but all is well. Anyways, during class I did the Vocabulary Building Online Activity, it was pretty much okay I knew majority of the words, and I also finished with the one or two parragraph for the misspelled words, surprisingly I only got 4 mistake out of the four levels that we had to do. [It was actually 6 but 2 words were the same so I counted them as one.]Crazy Vocab words were confusing, but I get it now. Well other than that, I'm just wait for my fourth essay to be done peer reviewing. "Rod if your done doing my peer review on my essay just put inside my folder. Okay? Thanks." And by the way" Tarryn your essay I finished peer reviewing your essay its inside your folder. I wish I had a Wii Fit, I always wanted one, hopefully for Christmas."


Bye everyone have a safe weekend.

Monday, November 1, 2010

Finished my vocabuary paper.

I am finished with my vocabulary paper. I feel smarter already. The words on there are kind of tricky. I enjoyed the practice. I feel like I have increased my word bank. I had an extremely productive day at home. I cleaned, moved furniture around, and laundry. I think I will go to K-Mart when I leave here. I want to see if there are any sales. I hope everyone is coming along with their essays. I wish everyone good luck.

Monday

Today, I worked on my 4th essay, I was absent last class so I only got to work on it now. I'm so glad I'm almost done and class is going to end, because I have a huge headache. I sat on the corner where it wasn't cold and I guess I'll be sitting at this spot from now on, I feel more comfortable and makes me concentrate on my paper more. This class is so cold thats why even with my jacket on. Anyways, thats all for today. Take care everyone, goodnight..

Very Good Night.

Good evening. Today was pretty straightforward, work on our argumentative essay. Still working on mine, hopefully getting it done by next week. I see there's not a lot of us today thinking there's no school today. It's not highschool guys. I do wish there wasn't any school today like the old days of highschool and middleschool and elementary school, but that's the part of growing up. I also got my revisions today for my last essay so I'm still doing that. Other than that, I'm having a really great night. Hope you guys drive safe and have a great Halloween....next year.
Hey everyone,
I started working on my vocabulary, at first my brain wasn't working properly but after the just reading and looking at the vocabulary it came to me. Well, besides that the classroom is still cold, even though I'm wearing a jacket and jeans. It's so freezing.
Back to my essay, I'm just waiting for Rod to do the peer review. So I can send it.

(ugh, my head it hurting.) I'll end it here.
Good night everyone.
Wednesday we will find out who is our new governor.

Not productive at all...

So I don't know if I have recovered from the weekend but I still feel tired. At the moment I have not done anything. Assignment is continue our 4th essay and do our vocabulary words. All I could do is continue to brainstorm for a topic and write my blog. I decided to wait until I get home and start. I'm not feeling too productive tonight. So I guess I to put comments on my class blogs. Well later and have a good night.

November 01,2010

Today we have to continue our Narrative Essay, I was done with mine ever since last week. I didn't attend class last meeting, that's why I"m kind a lost. But I try to catch up. I already have my topic for my Persuasive Essay, I choose to write about smoking. I might start with my paper this weekend or Wednesday if I have time.

11/1/10

I finished my third essay, but i feel so tired maybe it because of the heat.
I'm gonna start my fourth essay today if I could find the right topic.

Wednesday, October 27, 2010

Vocabulary building

I am working on my vocabulary building activity. It is actually helpful. Maybe I wont have to look words up so often. I am completely finished with essays. I am glad for that. I hope everyone has a happy Halloween. I am going to AFB for trick or treating with my girls. Everyone be safe and have a great time.

Argumentative Essay

Finally figured what I will be writing about for my argumentative essay. I hope I can support this topic well enough to aww my audience. Have a good weekend and see you all on Monday.

10/27

Hey everyone,
I finally finish writing my fourth essay, all I need to do now is type it, print it, peer review it, send it, edited it again, and WALA finish. ah ah. That's a long process, but how cares I can wait.
Well anyways, today we just talked about the fourth essay which is Argumentative Essay and different topics. After that, I started to work on my essay. (I'm so relief I'm done.)
Now I need to concentrate on my passing the SERT and the FINAL. (ahhhh... I'm scared.)

Well goodnight, see you all on Monday.

wow

Wow!, class today went by really fast, for me at least. Today I just did a little bit of researching on what topic that I should write about for the last essay. I think that I want write about the death penalty. This seems like an interesting topic to me. But I will see what I can find out about this thing.
Have a Great weekend
peace out

Old School with my Last Essay

Good evening everyone. How is everyone doing today? I am okay, pretty okay, okay as it can be. For some reason I've been going to class pretty early now, I don't know why, I just do it. Today we discuss our fourth essay which was an argumentative essay. In my opinion this will be a pretty tough one for me like the expository essay, but like what Journey sang: "Don't Stop Believing." My topic was the 1920's Golden Age of Sports and their figures and how they influence the sports they played in. I'm very comfortable with this because a quarter of me is a sports fan. I am actually 25% chocoholic, 25% sports fan, 26% wannabe chef and 100% awesome! Hope you guys have a great weekend, I will miss you guys...well not really because I hardly know most of you guys. Hope that wasn't offensive. What about this: I will miss your presence around me. I think that sounded better. Good night and take care. Peace *deuces up

October 27, 2010

This evening in class we discussed "What is an Argumentative Essay?",and list of
argumentative topics to give us an idea on what to write about. I'm glad I was finally able to pick a topic. Hopefully you find as interesting as I have, and as always, I hope did it correctly. My topic for my fourth essay is on the "Wii Fit." I wish you all luck on your fourth essay, and hope we all pass this semester. Good night.

Argumentative....

Today we are starting our 4th essay and so far I haven't come up with a topic. I don't know whether to choose the same topic as everyone student in the class and write it better than them so that the professor can recognize me more or to just ponder of a topic to separate myself from the them and be unique. Well anyways as I go through my thinking process I hope I have a winner that will help me be prepared for the final. That's all for now. To anyone reading this have a good weekend, Happy Halloween, and be safe. Peace!

10/27/10

I'm gonna start my fourth essay today but I need to finish my third essay first

Monday, October 25, 2010

Woo Hoo I am finished

Tonight was awesome. I finished my fourth essay and emailed it doctor Rivera. I also edited my revisions on my third from Dr. Rivera. I feel like today was a productive evening. I just wish I did not have so much cleaning to do when I get home. Ugh I really hate cleaning up after five people, but I guess it could be worse. Well everyone have a great nigh and drive safely.

10-25-10

Good evening everyone. Just finished writing my third essay and it's in the process of being peer-edited. I had fun writing this narrative essay. I really just went with the flow on whats in my head. Due to the five page limit, I'd have to do a shorten version of what my vision of the story really was, but I'm planning on doing the full story...one day. I'll probably post it up somewhere. Hope you guys are okay. December is closing in quickly and the final exam is right around the corner. Hopefully we all pass and then take EN110 and pass that class. Good night and have a great Guam morning.

Partner Forgets MY Paper!

Today I came to class excited to finish up my third essay that I have been working on. But only to find out, that my partner took it home and forgot to bring to class tonight. I was bummed that my partner forgot, but I just couldn't dwell on it. So, i moved on into my fourth essay, which is on Pros and Cons. I haven't really found out what I'm going to write about just yet. But, when I do, I will tell you guys what is it.

Fall 2010

Tonight I Finalized my narrative essay and submitted my midterm self reflection. I just handed my essay for peer review and hope to submit to Dr. Rivera before the end of class. I've yet to decide what my argumentative essay will be about. Need to think fast before all the topics are taken.

Would you believe that the end of the semester is fast approaching?

Another cold day in class..

I forgot to bring my jacket again! ugh it's so cold, but good thing I'm finally done with my third essay, and currently working on my fourth. I'm worried about my other classes, because we only have a month and a couple of days until school ends. I hope I pass all my classes.

October 25

Finally turn in my Narrative essay. Now I'm working on my last essay, Argumentative Essay. I'm going to be writing about "Gay Marriage". No I'm not Gay, I want to write about it, because all state and country should allow gay people to get married, no matter what their religions are if that makes them happy, let them be happy. Not only straight normal marriage have happiness but also Gay people.

Well, anyways I need to go searching for more research..

Good night everyone.

Third essay

I need to pass my third essay it's kinda short, it's only a four page essay.

October 25, 2010

Thank goodness I was able to finish my narrative essay. Hope fully,I did it correctly. I'm just waiting for my peer review, make any revisions if necessay, and send to Dr. Rivera for her final review. As always, I hope there is not a lot of revisions to be made.

Anyhow, I did decide on a topic for my persuasive essay, "Wii Fit." I hope you guys find it entertaining as much I do. After tonight's discussion on the "EN100W Evaluation Form/ Rubric," I'm kind of nervous on how I do on my final composition, not to mention the SERT test as well.

Good luck to all of you!!

September 25, 2010

Today we received a Rubric Paper. All we have to do today is finalize our Narrative Essay. I don't have anything to do because I'm done with all my work. I'm just waiting for Dr. Rivera to send me her correction on my essay.

Wednesday, October 20, 2010

Almost There

I just finish my mid-term paper about self reflection hoping Dr.Rivera accept it.
I wonder if were suppose to double space after each word or sentence. hope I got it right.

Almost came in late again

I rushed in to class this evening singed in and just went straight to working on my myself reflection essay,and wow thats the fast i could type on the computer not to mention my R is not really working with me. I hope I didnt rush too fast.

Midterms? Already? Question Mark?

Good evening ladies and gentlemen. Time for my daily Mon/Wed blog brought to you by Gatorade, drink up stupid. Thats right I'm being sponsored by Gatorade (and I'm loving their new slogan). Today was the day our midterm self reflection was due so I had to "due" it. Hehe get it? Me neither...Realizing it's already half way through semester, I was like "wow, already?" Time by goes fast and you don't even realize it until the end. Today I end up writing my reflection and will not have time to further progress on my third essay, I'll probably do it during the weekend on my spare-spare time. I hope you guys are all right and take it easy out there. All work and no play makes a really really sad life.

-Batman xoxoXXX

Wednesday in class.

Hello everyone. I hope everybody had a productive day in class. I sent in my third essay and I am working on my fourth. I hope it turns out the way I am anticipating. We also had to turn in our mid term self reflection. I have taken in alot from this class. I hope I can continue along the same path. I hope everyone has a wonderful weekend. Good Luck to everyone on their essays.

Mid-terms

Well today was the due date for our mid-terms. Sad for anyone who hasn't done it yet, hope you enjoy staying back after class and working on it. To those who has done it ahead of time or just finished in class good job and enjoy your weekend by doing other essays that are due next week. Well I don't know what else to say besides, goodnight everyone and have a good weekend.

October 20, 2010

Good evening everyone. I hope everyone is doing fine this evening. This evening I have just turned in my Midterm and Self-Reflection paper, but unfortunately I've fallen behind with my narrative essay. I'm so disappointed in myself for loosing focus, but hopefully by next week I'll be back on track. I've finally decided on a topic for my narrative essay "My Best Friend." I hope I will be able to complete by next week.

October 20, 2010

Surprisingly I finished my Narrative and Reflection PapErs. I didn'tGO last meeting, so I'm kind a lost, but luckily Dr. Rivera told me what they did last class. So now I just have to send my papers to Dr. Rivera's email, then I will be done. I'm so happy because it's such a relief to know that I am done with all my homework in this class.

Three down ONE to go (essay)

Hey everyone, just finished sending my Mid-term Self-Reflection and Narrative Essay. I'm just waiting for Dr. Rivera to send me my revise essay. Other than that, I'm starting on my last and final essay Argumentative Essay. I'm stuck with to topic which are, Gay Marriage or the Legal Drinking Age. Help me choose, I'm not so sure on what to write.
Well, I know I miss class on Monday, for I had a family emergency to go to. I didn't even go to my first class as well, but I was in school early.
Oh my, the class is really cold. I should of wore jeans or a pants.
Take care. the weekend is almost near.
Have Fun!
Bye! :)

Wednesday

Yes! Today is Wednesday and one more day to go. And that means the weekend and you know what that means. That means that you still have to wake up tomorrow and go to work. The Rangers won again today beating the Yankees 10-3. Man that was a awesome game that is if your a Ranger fan. Rangers are going all the way this post season. About class today, it went well and I was able to turn in my midterm self-reflection on time and continuing to work on my story.
peace out
GO VIKINGS!

Absent on October 18, 2010

I apologize for not being able to attend class on Monday, October 18, 2010 due to unforseen circumstances. I hope I didn't miss much this class session.

Reflection

I need to finish my reflective essay, I don't really know what to write. I hope that i would pass this subject.

Tuesday, October 19, 2010

ugh...

Tonight I worked on my self reflection and I am worried that I may not pass this class once again. I must admit working a full time job, having a family to care for, and going to school is a challenge on the other hand I must add that I am definitely trying. After taking this class four times I'm hoping that I finally pass especially that it is the only one class which holds me back from furnishing my certificate.

Monday, October 18, 2010

Sorry

Hey everyone, I know I didn't attend class yesterday. I was at school, but didn't attend any of my classes. Something important and emergency came up. I hope I'm excuse. So anyways, what happen in class? What was the class work? Did I miss anything?
Please let me know... Thanks.

editorial..

Today I worked on my editorial so I can finally submit it, I know so late right? I didn't get to work on my essay because of that, but its okay. I have the rest of the night to work on my essay and Mid-term self reflection paper thats due on Wednesday. It was a cold day again and I so forgot to bring my jacket, so I ended up sitting on the other side of the room.

Nighty night

Tonight was a good night. I continued on my narrative essay and believe it or not it's not done, considering that I am already half way through my second page and I have not yet double spaced. I think by the time I am done it will be a novel. Sorry, I missed last weeks classes however between my sons and I we were all sick. We went to see a doctor on Monday and the doctor prescribed me Motrin 600mg and some rest. On the other hand my sons both had their asthma and common flu which has been going round. So just trying to get better and back in the swing of things. See you all Wednesday.

Back to Class

So today, I played catch up. I submitted my essay and editorial that was due like last week. So late. Better late than never. I hope I atleast get some kind of grade, other than a zero. Once again, my mind is blank. I don't know what to write for my narrative essay. Anyone have ideas for me? Help.

Issues...

Hey guys. Good evening. Well not really for me. Everything until like 6 o' clock was great. My microsoft word at home isn't working, which prevented me from working on my essay and a deal of great work due for my class Tuesday. So I'm screwed for awhile, but I will still find a way to work on a draft for my essay at home and over here at the class at the same time. My midterms for my culinary class is tomorrow, so I'll be sleepless tonight studying my anus off. Wish me luck classmates and best of luck to you in the world because we all know the world is hard, but we can be harder. That didn't really made a lot of sense there, but it's a quote nontheless. Peace

Forgot MY Jacket Again

Why did i forget my jacket again? Tonight's class was super cold. Anyways, our mid-term reflection is due next class session, which is Wednesday. So happy we dont have to make people edit it, saves so much time like that and less work to do. I'm almost finish with my third essay. I need to start being a little more responsible with my assignments. Hope i finish everything on time.

So behind...

So I miss last Wednesday night of class and I feel as if I missed a lot. Although the assignment of the day was to finish up on our narratives. Anyways I just heard today that I still have to turn in my editorial (which I never thought of doing since I never came up with an idea) and that we have a mid-term self-reflection paper. Well it seems like I have a lot of catching up to do. So far I don't have the motivation to start on any of these anytime soon. Hopefully I can shake off this laziness and get to work.

It is Monday again!! Whay cant it be Friday?

I hope everyone had a safe and productive weekend. I went to Haputo beach and bowling. The hike to the beach was brutal, and I dont recommend going there. It was beautiful and relaxing once you finally made it down though. I just finished my mid-term self reflection and I need to start my last essay. It is jut not flowing from my mind as I had anticipated. HopefullyI will make some progress on my topic soon because it is frustrating me. I have to go home and apologize again to my brother for erasing his powerpoint homework. I was trying to put my paper on his flash drive, then oops. Well have a goodd night everyone and be careful.

Monday October 18, 2010

Today class was okay. For me it was not that because I finally remembered to bring my sweater to class. Looks like everyone is here today except may be one or two person(s). I feel okay because I am doing well on my essay. Well, that is all for the day and I will see you guys on Wednesday.
Peace out

I thought I had nothing to worrie about...

The moment I stepped into class Dr.Rivera asked me if i ever turned in my essay and my editorial paper I said of yeah, thinking that I am all up par with my work, but I guess not. Luckly I save all my essay into my e-mail all I had to do was send my woked again.I think I got spamed! lol

3rd essay

I finally submit my third essay but I need to start on my self reflection essay...

Wednesday, October 13, 2010

quiet class

Today class we had to start on our third essay for the semester. I figured out what I'm going to do already. I didn't really finish my essay because I'm still figuring out what to put in my essay. Also, I think I need to bring a jacket next time. It was super cold in class.

Such a cold day..

Another class day has ended and man it was so cold today, I didn't to work on my essay much, because I was cold.. speaking of essay I had to do my 3rd essay two times ugh it makes me mad! The first time was, because I lost my flash drive and the second time I forgot to save it. oh, yeah we also went over our 4th essay and its all about.

Finally!!!!

I'm finally done with my Narrative Essay. My partner corrected it already. Maybe I'll send it to Dr. Rivera tomorrow. I'm so happy because I don't have to worry about it in the weekend.
Hey everyone,
I just finished typing my narrative essay and now I'm just waiting for the peer review before I send it to Dr. Rivera. Other than that I just finish typing my mid-self term reflection.
Now, I need to focus on writing my last essay, Argumentative essay, now I really need to think on what to right. I have a feeling is going to be difficult for me to write, but will see.
Gosh, this classroom is getting colder. I can't stand it. my legs are shaken.
See you guys next week.
Don't party to Hard, now!
Drive safe. :)
Today we discuses about the mid-term paper its going to be two pages at list and the due date will be October 20th which is next Wednesday. That paper will be about our self- reflection in this class.

Eww, epidermis is on my skin.

Good evening everybody. Nice to see everybody back from the holiday monday, even though it was not actually a holiday at GCC. Today we went over our events for the last two months of class. This got me thinking on how fast the semester has gone by and we need to have some sort of party or something because I still don't know like half of you guys even though we go classes together. So is that suppose to be the college experience? If so, then bleh, but whatever. I'm currently brainstorming and outlining my narrative essay. I really want this to be epic. My last blog told you about the idea of my essay and today I was probably going into like a Scott Pilgrim vs. the World type of story. If you don't what that is, just google or askjeeves (who still uses that? honeslty) it and you'll know what I mean. I'm thinking of going above the minimum of the two pages and probably go around 2-3 pages so I can lay out the characters nicely. Hope ya'll are all right with your essays and ya. Nighty night.

Another Day

Today is just another day in EN100W. Just been working on my narrative essay here and there. Now just doing a little blogging here and there you know the drill. No Facebook (coughs) for me because we're not to go on Facebook (laughs silently). And also been thinking on what to write on my self-reflection. That is all for today boys and girls. Have a safe weekend, drink safe, party safe, and remember drive fast don't crash. See you Monday for another EN100W adventure.
peace out

October 13, 2010

This evening Dr. Rivera went over with the class the criteria for our Mid-Term and Final Self-Reflection Paper. She also went through the Calendar of Events for the remaining class days to insure that we are all in line with what was expected of us. I honestly didn't think I would have made it this far with this class. I'm so happy I stayed because like Dr. Rivera mentioned time is going by really fast and before you know it, it's the end of the semester. Hopefully I am able to complete what is required and I pass this course.

Day 16: Working on it

Hey everybody I know what your thinking where is Rod? Or maybe not, because there are a handful of us in class compared to the beginning and not that much people really talk to each other other than there neighbors. Anyways Dr. Rivera if you are reading this I do apologize not showing up today I know I am missing some awesome information that would benefit the class. Just to let you know, although I am not in class I am still working on my essay. So later everyone have a good weekend expect me to be back Monday night. Peace!

On monday

Well I was not here on Monday, but I hated to miss class. I have been sick and not feeling 100%. I hope everyone had a great class. I am finished with my first three essays and I am starting on my fourth. I am still undecided on what topic. Everything I want to write about is very controversial. I will figure it out soon.

Monday, October 11, 2010

Day 15: Getting there

Well today the class and I just reviewed over some notes about narrative essays. It was very helpful, it gave me a better understanding on how to have a good body structure for my paper. With the help I am going through my rough draft with a little bit of ease. It is not yet done but hopefully by the end of the day I will go to bed having draft one finished. Well later, take care, and have a great Columbus day... wait what am I saying we are in school. So much much for having a great one -_-".
Today is such a rainy day. It's so cold. I'm even wearing a jacket and jean; and I'm still cold. Gosh Guam's weather is so unpredictable. Well anyways, today we just talked about narrative essay and prompts. Speaking of narrative, I'm almost done typing it out, I hope to finish typing it so I can make rod read it and send it to Dr. Rivera and start on my argumentative essay. So I should go now, because I only have 7 minutes to finish typing.

Happy Columbus Day!!

Hey, where is everyone? Didn't they get the memo on facebook that there IS school today? Oh well, there's enough people in here to start an English Essay Party!! I really don't know what happens in those parties because I never got invited to those....... Enough about my sad-party-less life. Today we read about Narrative Essay and got some prompts to get us starting. I'm quite excited about this type of essay, since I like telling stories, which is also a problem. Seeing as I can write any story, I'm still brainstorming on the idea. I do have one in my head that i'm just tryin to write in paper first. I got inspired by one of our classmates, Krystal (hope I spelled that right, sorry if I didn't) and one of my good friends, Julian who are both dancers. Right now is about a guy who wants to learn how to dance so he can hook up with this one chick. He goes on to this wonderful, totally fictional adventure. It's going to have a good moral ending to it. Ooops. Did I just start outlining my essay on this blog? Nice! So yeah, initially the title of the essay would be "The Guy Who Want to Learn How to Dance So He Can Hook Up with This One Chick." and I was seriously thinking of sticking with that, but I decided to change it to "I Can Dance!!!" It's going to be mindblowing, I just need to start drafting it. Wish me luck.

October 11, 2010

Today we read the information about Narrative Essay. I started my essay and I'm almost done. It's so cold today. I have so much homework to do, especially with my MatH CLass. I'm very sleepy but I try my best to finish my work.

October 11, 2010

This evening in class we discussed "What is a Narrative Essay?” We also read a couple of narrative essay prompts to help give us some ideas on what to write about. Unfortunately I still have no idea what my topic will be. I guess I'm going to have to do a little more brainstorming this evening; hopefully I do come up with a topic. Good luck to all of you on yours.

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Hey everyone how you guys doing today? I always forget my sweater for this class because it's super cold. My other classes are okay I suppose (temperature). Don't know what my narrative essay is going to be about, but I'm still brainstorming on what to write about. But I have so many stories that I want to write about. Hey has anyone seen that new Chamorro Punch commercial on T.V., it's probably that best commercial on right now. Now let me get back to my brainstorming so I can figure out what to write about.

Wednesday, October 6, 2010

hmmm

Today, I finished up on my informative essay as well as my editorial. However, I have not decided what my narrative paper will be about.

Day 14: Writer's block

Well today is the first day I started on my narrative essay. So far I have my plot, characters, and setting, but yet I can not seem to type my introduction. I am thinking of that one perfect sentence to really catch the viewer's attention. I know it is best to just write and review it after, but I always have a habit of just correcting my mistakes on the spot. Hopefully I will be able to think of one as soon as possible, because I don't want to worry about it over the weekend. Well good luck for those of you who hasn't decided on their topic, I know you'll have a kick-ass story. Later, have a good weekend and be safe. Oh hay!

essays..

Today, I had extra work to do, because I missed class on Monday, but its okay. I was thinking of joining the the Halloween contest essay thing, but I changed my mind, its too much work, I'm busy with work and school to top it off studying for my math test next week. sigh. Well, I guess thing ends another class day. I worked on my essay and my final draft, so I think I'm all good.

october 6

Today our essays were do. I hate freaken essays! Anyways, this class went by super fast for some reason. I don't know what it was, but I'm happy it went by fast. Now i can go home and sleep for work tomorrow.
Hey everyone,
Guess what?!? I finally have my topic for my narrative essay. My topic is about Day Dreaming. I love to day dream and fantasy about things.I'm almost done with it! All I need to do is to type it and have a peer review and then send it to Dr. Rivera. Ahhh! I'm so happy.
Other than that, I came to class early so I can start on my 3rd essay.
Nothing really exciting happened today.

Schadoodle

Man what weird weather we have today. It was pouring like it was 2012 on the way here and I was thinking of where all those people in the smoke area at GCC are at. I hope they had a place to smoke and such. I don't know why I was thinking about that mainly because everytime I get dropped of for this class at night, the weather is okay and they're at the smoke zone. Okay enough about that. Today was the due date for the editorial and the second essay. Finshed my second essay last class and just finished and sending my editorial to Dr. Rivera. My editorial was about the important of washing your hands, which is really important. I hope the weather isn't as bad as it was in the beginnning. That's about it. No jokes or whatever. You guys take care and remember: take it one step at a time.

October 06, 2010

I'm finally done with my Editorial Essay, I'm just waiting for Dr. Rivera's correction. For my fourth essay I might title it " Princess in the Middle Age", it's about a Princess who has to run away home to escape the marriage that her mother has for her and to find his brother King Arthur, whose body disappeared after the battle. I found an interest on this story because no one knows if King Arthur really did existed and she said it can be fictional so I decided to add on the story of King Arthur. It also talks about the life of a princess have, though she is loyalty and free from war, she is still imprisoned by her mother's decision. HoPe this story works out

What to write about?

I am ahead because I had to write a paper over. I dont know where to begin with the next essay.I am so tired and I am having a hard time focusing on my work. I am thinking about my bed. I am also very hungry. The airport extended a contingent offer for work today. I am very excited and I hope it goes through. I need something more to do. I anyone has any ideas about the next essay let me know.

Back to EN100W

Today is my first day in class since last week and man am I behind they had another assignment that was due today that I did not know about. Some kind of editorial or something like that. But that is my fault for not showing up to class. I was really sick well I have been sick but then I got a flu shot on Saturday. Like we all know that when you get a flu shot you actually get the flu. Then on Monday the flu got worst and I just stayed home because I knew that I got sick from the flu shot.
Well till next class and a new post.
peace out

October 6, 2010

Today is the deadline for our 2nd essay and editorial assignment. I'm so grateful that Dr. Rivera gave us time to work on these two assignments during today's class session. I was able to finalize my editorial with some minor changes. I sure hope I get a good feedback from Dr. Rivera. My next task is to figure out what my topic will be for my narrative essay. I didn't realize how difficult it would be to write a story, but when you talk about one it's a different story. Wish me luck!

new essay

Time to do my new essay, I want to write a romance, mystery genre but writing a harem genre essay. I also need to pure edit my second essay

Monday, October 4, 2010

essay change up again...last minute things are the best...

Tried to like the first topic but I know it's not gonna work out for me in the end....gotta be creative!

What did I do in Class Today

I steped into my English class around 8:12 to 9:30, during my class time I went online in the computer. As I went to my email I pulled out my Rivised Discriptive Essay, and reviewed it for atlest fithteen minutes. Next work on my revised essay for atleast 3o minuste of corecting, then went onto note taking about and event happening this week Oct/6 about Govenor election ,held at GCC Aditorum around 6pm to 7:30pm. All GCC student are requested to attend freely.

Day 13

Oh hay! How is everybody this weekend? Hope it turned out great. As for me it was fine just being around friends and family, especially with my brother Rodney. He just flew in from San Diego a couple days ago for our Dad's one year death anniversary. It's nice to have the family together again, I just wish that it wasn't because of a tragedy. Well anyways going back to the class life, we are still working on our informative essays and editorial. I am glad that I have finally finished with my essays and now I just have to worry about my editorial and getting started on my narrative well hope you guys are in the same boat as me. I got to go bye take care. Oh hay!
Hey everyone,
It's nice for being back here in this cold classroom. Well, I finally finished with my informative essay and also my editorial. My editorial is about the legal drinking age is useless, because no matter the legal age is several people will never have the responsible to drink and drive. Well, other then that for my Narrative essay I think I'm going to write about How the DanzJazz Concert made me feel. Thanks Rod (for giving me that idea) I was also thinking of it before he mentioned it, but as for now I am not really sure. I'm still doubting my topic. ugh this is going to be hard. I have till Wednesday to figure it out. Well see when the day comes, hope I figure it out soon.

Falling asleep and behind....


I am so tired right now. I feel like my head is so heavy and my work is not even half way done. I need to finish it tomorow night so I can send it to Dr. Rivera for editing. However, my editorial is done. Yah!!!
So atleast I only have to worry about the essay that is constantly making my mind blank.

Finished with my 2nd essay...again.

Dear fellow classmates,


Today is October 04, 2010. The time is around 9:00pm. Maybe even more by the time I'm finished with this essay. I have this weird feeling I have to make my post in a letter-style-style so bear with me today. I come to class pretty early today due to the fact it was boring outside and I wanted to finished my second essay in time for peer review so i can send it to Dr. Rivera in time for the due date on Wednesday. Today was pretty okay, not a lot of us today, probably because it was a Monday and you know Mondays. I just finished my overhauled second essay and about to send it to Dr. Rivera for my edit so I can edit it one more time and turn it it one more time. I hope it's okay and I hope you guys are okay. So okay, I'm going to go and stuff.

-Bernard xoxoxxxoooXXX

p.s. that's hugs and kisses by the way

p.s.s. it's for all of you, no tongue of course, like a friendly kiss and hug.

Finished my essay

Well I hope I am all finished. I sent my essay to Dr. Rivera. I am hoping it meests the proper standard this time. I had to redo my essay last week, but that is alright. It was a learning experience. I have to type my editorial. I left my papers at home to finish my topic.I will finish tommorow. I have a test tommorow for TSA. I dont know what information they are testing on but I will find out tommorow.
I think I am not going to make it for the death line of our second essay, because I lost my flash drive and my essay its inside my flash drive, so I don’t have choose I just restart on my second essay today and I will try to finish it before Wednesday. Hope she will give me some more time to revise it.

October 4, 2010

Finally, I finished my Informative Essay. My partner is peer editing it. I'm also half way done with my Narrative Essay, which is a good thing. It is about a life of a Princess during the Middle Age. And for my editorial essay, I'm not quite done yet. This week I have to do a lot of homework but I try to finish it all on time.

October 4, 2010

Dr. Rivera instructed the class to continue working on our 2nd essay and when we are finished with peer review, the next step is to email her a copy so she can edit as well. She also reminded the class that both our editorial as well as our 2nd essay is due on Wednesday, the day after tomorrow. I've completed my 2nd essay with my peer review, and I just need to make revisions as needed then I can proceed with my editorial. I have no idea what my subject will be for my editorial. I sure hope I will be able to complete this assignment on time.

2nd essay

I need to finish my essay today time is running out T.T
but i think i can finish it on time and get starting on my next essay, the title of my next essay is "the frozen sun"

Wednesday, September 29, 2010

Sorry I didn't attend class yesterday. Like I said in my other blog that I had a rehearsal to attend.
So what happen in class when I was their? Hope I didn't miss anything.

Finally I found a topic

I finally made up my mind about my second essay topic. It's about a beer bong, not that I do this sort of thing everyday but, It's what I chose.

Yeah

Today I reviewed my sample Sert test believe it or not I scored an 84% which is passing however I have taken and passed the Sert test before therefore I don't need to take it anymore. Lucky me!
I also continued working on my essay #2 and believe it or not today was one of my best days I actually got a lot done compared to other days. However, I must continue and finalize before I do peer editing and submit a final paper. I hope my eagerness continues.

Essay number Two

I think my essay is going to super long. I am doing an essay on the Seven Wonders of the Ancient World. I don't know for some reason I have always been facinated by Greek and Egypt. I love to learn about their history. So any way I am only writing about the first location of the seven and it is already a page. I think I will have to pick one and write all about that.

Redo? Uh oh spaghetti o's

Hey guys. Good evening. Today was pretty laid back. I got my email from Dr. River saying I HAVE TO REDO MY ESSAY. It was a bummer, but thats life. You just have to learn from your mistakes and be a better person, or a better essay. I know that sounds cliche, but it is true (which is also cliche). We also brought our editorials in class today, I bought an old PDN and shared the second half of that to Rod, who is my good friend since we were 5. Bad choice. Looking at my first half of the editorial, I saw that the article was in chamorro. Chamorro. I mean I took chamorro classes since I was in elementary but nothing could prepare me for that. I do wish I understand Chamorro so I can read the article, luckily there was a second article on the left side of that page about the liberation day parade and how to be safe on that day. That is about it, my day off is tomorrow and I'm going to the mall for my class so it doesn't get any better than that. Hope yall take care and have a safe night and my arms and fingers are starting to sore from all the typing I've done today. I think this is the most typing I've done in a long, long, long time. Okay, I need to stop typing or else it's going to be sore sore. Yeah I'm goin to stop any moment. Like right about no

Tonight in class.

I have to write another informative essay. I am fine with that because I really enjoy writing. I hope this topic is easier for me to finish this essay in a timely fashion. I am researching the information and I am actually studying about the topic in another class. We went over editorials this evening and we have to write one for next week. I have some homework ahead of me. I hope everyone is doing well on their essays. Good luck with finishing everything for next week.

Another day

Today and yet again I was late hehe and I was just sitting outside the whole time. I brought in a newspaper so I can work on my editoral, but I decided to work on my second essay instead, because Dr. Rivera says we can have the weekend to do it.

Day 11 and 12

Day 11:
Oh hay! just finished my 2nd draft informative paper now all I got to do is wait for the teacher to edit it and finish my informative paper. Oh that was one problem off my shoulder's, I am slowly catching up ^_^. Well anyways I am doing okay in the class just like everyone else. I was glad when I found out my progress now I just need to keep it up and hopefully pass this course.

Day 12:
Reading the editorial was okay. Thanks to Batman the article he gave me really caught my attention. The article talks about Steven LeFever, resident of Dededo. His topic " Alcohol laws hurt nightlife culture", being nineteen I enjoy being in the clubs or bar having nice cold beer after a hard day from work. Unfortunately with the new drinking law I can't have those moments again unless I'm at a friends house who is twenty-one year old. It's nice to drink at a friend's house too, but I prefer being out there meeting new people as I am with my friends. I am what you call "a safe driver", before the the transition of the new law I would always make sure that I had designated driver or I was sober enough to drive my friend's home. Not saying that the new law is unfair or anything it's just reading this article made me think, what if the law was passed two years ago? Would the tragic accident of Ramon Oberiano, a nineteen year boy still happen today? Would he be sober while driving? Not only that the new law has change the lifestyle of others, but what's going to happen to the alcohol-serving businesses? So far from what I know The Venue, Club/bar lounge in Maite was recently closed down, what's next denials? after 5? Well I don't know what's going to happen next but until next time everyone have a good weekend and be safe.

Northern Light

The title of my second essay is actually the seven wonders of the world.
But, I'm actually just learning about it. So if you guys know something about it that I
might not know yet, give me the heads up.

September 29, 2010

Today we began class with a discussion on how to do our editorial assignment. I'm so glad that Dr. Rivera gave us an extension because my mind is blank. Anyhow, I'm currently waiting for my peer review for my 2nd essay, in the meantime I'm going to try to figure out what my topic will be for my 3rd essay. Wish me luck.

September 29,2010

Today we had to bring our Editorial Paper, which I totally forgot. I'm not even done with my "Informative Essay", I really want it detailed so it's taking me time to finish. Our editorial and informative essay are due Wednesday, I got to hurry. I'm so frustrated because all of my class have homework, especially my Math Class. That's why I got to stay up late to try to finish all my homework...

change topic

I need to change my topic because I'm having a hard time on my last topic T.T

Monday, September 27, 2010

We have a teacher and student conference today, our teacher was talk to each of the student and shows them where they stand and how well they did on the test, she also encourages them. She told the class that the final will be in 45 minutes and no peer review.

I am scatter brained tonight

I just posted a blog and completely forgot to talk about our one on one conference with Dr. Rivera. I did enjoy the feedback on how I am doing in the class. It is a positive outlook as far as this class goes. I did not do as well as I anticipated on the sert test. I was a little surprised because it seemed to be so simple. Well good night again.

Continuing my narrative essay.

I am really finding this essay to be my most challenging. My family was always on the wild side and trying to describe it in a narrative fashion is not coming to me very easy. There is much to include in a small paper, but I am up for the challenge. I had a really productice day today, and i hope it continues throughout the week. I look forward to class every week. It is my brief chance to be Heidi and not mom for a few hours. I enjoy every minute but miss them at the same time. I am rambling, and wont bore you any longer. I took B-12 this morning. I highly recommend it for natural energy. Have a wonderful night and I will see everyone on Wednesday.

Monkeys in a Treebar.

Yeah I thought my title would catch you guys. Good evening fellow classmates/bloggers. Today was our one-to-one conference. She talked to us one by one and explain progress. I was doing okay in here class, which was good. I just need to keep practice my essays because I'm still not that good. I just finished emailing my second essay to her, waiting for a editted version of my paper so i can turn in my final paper and yeah. Hope all yall are doing all right. Peace

Back to Class

Hey!
I'm back to class with nothing but a blank brain on what to do for my Informative essay. I think I have to many options and my mind can't decide. I need to narrow it down.
Any way it feels good to be back. I hope to have a decision before class ends.
Well, I was the second person that had a teacher-student conference. Well, my problem for this class in order for me to pass is my SERT! ahhhh I don't like that test, well I don't have much of a choice but to take it to move on from this level of English.
Other then the teacher-student conference, I'm still searching for the right topic for my narrative essay, this is taking longer than I thought, but hopefully I find the right one soon.

By the way, I won't be in class on Wednesday, September 29,2010 for I have a Tech & Dress Rehearsal for a Dance Company this Saturday, October 02, 2010. This is going to be my last concert. If you would like to attend or watch its going to be at Mercy Heights (Sister Riberta). Theirs a 2pm show and a 7:30pm or 7pm (not so sure for the night show) show.
Well, I'm just letting everyone know that I won't be here.
Update me on what happen on Wednesday class meeting.
Thanks. :)

Just Starting

Just starting on my second essay. This class is going by fast or i'm just slacking , but I got to
get my act together if I want to pass this class. I wonder if i'm up for the pressure.

September 27, 2010

Unfortunately I was not able to attend last class session because of my job. Fortunately I was able to complete my first draft of my second essay and print it out for peer review. Hopefully, there are not a lot of revisions to be made.

September 27, 2010

I didn't go Class last class, because I was kind a sick. Today I still have to finish my Informative Essay, it's so frustrating. Hopefully I might finish it this Sunday. I just came from work so I'm exhausted and I'm still sick, but I got to do my essay to get a good grade. Dr. Rivera will call me soon for a C0nference, got to get ready....

i just finish my essay

^^, finally I've finally finish my essay I just need to edit my essay..

Wednesday, September 22, 2010

Day 9 and 10

Well here's a quick summary of what went on Monday. I came to class dropped off crystal's paper with my corrections. Then I left early, reason for that is I'm a 19 year old college student with no car and depends on friends for transportation. So basically one friend of mine couldn't drop me home so asking another friend in the school he gets out at 8:30 and that was my only option.

As for today I'm so behind in my paper. Anyways I'll be lying when I say I'm almost done. So Lets just say I'm half way there... -_-" fail! Hopefully I'll get over my procrastination and finish up my paper and get back on track. Well that's all for now everyone have a good weekend and be safe.
Today I received revisions for my descriptive essay from Dr. Rivera. Because I was eager to get paper #1 done with I came into class early and got started. After completing paper 1 I continued to do my research for paper #2 and changed up my topic focusing in on the Head Start program. But as usual because of the time and it being a long day I am experiancing a BRAIN FART so now I know how i'll be spending my weekend. So until next week you all have a great weekend. Adios amigos

No Idea

Should I my narrative essay be " No Idea"? Because I don't have any clue on what to write. Rod said it's original. I forgot what he said but anyways. HELP!

Second Essay: Completed!!!Exclamation mark

Good evening ladies and gentleman and ladiegentlemens. Today was an okay day here at my 100w class. We went straight to our computers and continue working on our essay. Today I finished my essay (WOOT!!!). I deserve some cake or something. Informative essay are not my strong areas, I'm usually the narrative essay type of guy, which will come in handy because that is the third type of essay we are set to do. So narrative essay, beware because I'm coming to get you. That sounded weird and stalkerish. Oh well. I hope everyone is having at least an okay time with their essays. Thats about it. I will post up again in Monday. "Peace out, A-town." -Usher

contest

So is anyone going to write a short story for the contest?
I finished writing my informative essay, I'm just waiting for Dr. Rivera to send me the revised one. Other than that, ugh I can't seems to have any topic to start my narrative. It's giving my a headache just trying to find one. My life isn't that exciting from my point-of-view. Epic Fail for me. I need to think of one quick so I can start. Well, anyways got to go now still need to find a topic to write about for the next essay.

All finished with my essay.

I am finished with my essay. I am having a hard time choosing the next topic. My life has been a whirl wind . How do you narrow it down? I will have to give it lots of thought. I want to write about growing up in New Orleans , but that could go on forever as an essay.
Today we schedule to continue work on our second essay; we also do the same things we been doing like posting on the student blog and sending comment to other. For me I just start on my second essay and I been thinking if I can make it to the death line for the first draft.

Think, think, think.....

Hello again my EN 100W friends, whats good in the hood? Just been working on Informative Essay and stuff. Whats you guys and ladies been doing? It's hard to think when your mind is somewhere else, wait it is impossible to do that, or is it? (Thinks for a few seconds) I don't know because I can't think right now. Looks like people are missing in the class today huh? Man this is a lot of questions that I'm asking you guys. You don't have to answer any not that you were going to anyways.(laughing) But that will be all for the day see you people next week(You people, what do you mean "you people")

peace out

second essay

I'm running out of idea on what to wright. T.T
hopefully I finish my essay today.

Tuesday, September 21, 2010

Starting my new essay.

Well I was pretty much finished and then I lost my flash drive. I did have my rough draft so I just retyped it. I added more information which I wanted to in the first place. Class flew by I didnt even realize the time .

Monday, September 20, 2010

This is the day we are going to turn in our first draft of our first essay, and we started the second essay.
Today I was a little late for class! So I sat down thinking about my second topic for my next essay. I'm not to sure if I want to do the topic that I thought of.

Research....

Today, I choose my informative essay topic and started on my research regarding my topic on Early Childhood Education as I waited for my essay paper #1 to be proof read by Dr. Rivera. I choose to write my essay #2 on early childhood education because of my profession as a Head Start Teachers aide and because I can relate well with the topic. I've started on my outline and will continue to do some researching and gathering of information. Well good night and see you all Wednesday.
Hey everyone, just finish writing my essay again. I had to do it all over again. cause of the mistakes, well I'm going to ask rod to re-check my work before I send it to Dr. Rivera, so almost done. Well today we just went straight to working our essay. The first essay is due today, so gets does essay in. Beside the the first paper being due, we worked on our second essay.

sick..

I went to school sick, so I couldn't really concentrate much. i did my last paragraph and read the e-mails Dr. Matilda sent me and thats about it. oh Vince got me tissue for my running nose hehe so thanks Vince.

One essay down, one more to go

Hey guys. How are you? Me? I'm doing good, I'm kind of tired, but I'm still alive so that's always good. Why I my talking like there's another person in here talking to me? I don't know. So today was pretty basic. We went online and just finished our first essay, which is due today. Thank God I finished mine ever since that one day. Now we are tasked with doing an informative essay and I could tell you mine is doing okay. I'm halfway done, so another halfway done to go. That's about it, I will see you guys on Wednesday. Drive safe, or if your not driving, walk safe, or if your not walking, fly safe.

September 20, 2010

Today is the final day to turn-in our first essay. I am currently waiting for my peer review from my partner so I can make any revisions if needed. In the meantime, I thought I'd work on posting my blog entry for this evening before I forget. Fortunately, I was able to decide on a topic for my second essay and inform Dr. Rivera this evening. I certainly hope you guys don't find it boring, it's on "Egyptian Mummification".

September 20, 2010

Today we just have to finish our Descriptive Essay. But for me I just need to finish my Informative Essay. I'm so exhausted because I had work today, but it's alright because I had a good meal with my family. And I'm so happy because I passed my BLS Class For Healthcare Provider (CPR). Now I kind a know hOw to do CPR on Adults and Infants and save people who are choking:)!

Better Late Than Never

My first time blogging, don't know what to expect out of this but I think this
is a class requirement and i need all the point's i can get to pass this class plus i think
it a cool way to chat with someone next to you and not even talk.

vision

I'm having a little research for my topic it's kinda hard working on my essay with out any information about it

Wednesday, September 15, 2010

Had to misss class due to family emergency

My brother who is 16 had to have surgery . Warning for guys testitical contorsion is painful and deadly. I have guardianship of him and had to take him to the er and they had to do an immediate surgery. Sorry for missing class. I hope this is a viable excuse.

Day off tomorrow....school tomorrow uggh

Hey guys. Its me again. Today we went online using these magical equipment called a "computer" and went to something called a "blog" and read Revising and Editing. It was about revising and editing your essay (duh, what where you expecting, donuts?). After reading that, we resume on our essays, whether it was essay #1 or essay #2 (in which I am doing right now, shabooyah). As you can tell I'm in a pretty good mood, I don't know why, it might because I know I'm going to get some sleep tonight. Sleep is like a gift from the Gods to me these days, heck I would love sleep to be one of my present for Christmas or Kwanzaa, whichever my family celebrates this year. That's about it for today, everyone is cool and please COMMENT ON MY BLOG PLEASE!! I'm in dire need of attention because of my self-esteem level is down :( hehe peace2

-Batman

HELLO =]

Hey girl hey! [ah aha.] just kidding. Well, I re-edited my 2nd essay. Finally finish just waiting for MR. OH HaY! a.k.a ROD! [bleh bleh] to do the finishing touches, then I have to re-re-edit it again and then send it to Dr. Rivera. Oh Gad, that sound like a long process but it isn't all I have to do to is wait and wait.[eheheh] Well other then that the class read about revising and editing and then went straight to our essay. Well anyways, I'm going to start commenting peoples blogs


Bye bye for now till next time... SMiLE :D

Not content... need some help

Today, I continued to work on paper #1. Not content if it is what is expected of a descriptive paper I guess that is why i've had to repeat this class once too many times. Looking around to see who I can bother to do peer editing but everybody is busy at work so i decided to post blog.

oops.... Sorry

Was looking just now for my last post and couldn't find it. I think i forgot to hit the publish post button because i was in such a hurry last class time. Anyhow, if i remember clearly i wrote about how sorry i was that i missed last Wednesday's class because i had come down with some kind of sickness and was not feeling well. However, while i was out i did get a chance to work on my essay.

September 15, 2010

Today we discussed Revising and Editing an essay. We each took turns reading aloud a section of the Revising and Editing an essay portion. I was happy that I was able to complete my first essay and had given it to my partner, Jovana for peer editing. Hopefully, she doesn't need to do alot.

September 15

Today we went over Revising and Editing. I came a little late to class so the class was already done reading it. But, I got to read a little bit of it cause when i sat down it was already my turn. After, we had to finish our final draft. I ended up finishing it cause I just had to write a conclusion. Our other assignment was to write another essay, which I'm not looking foward to really. But, its out assignment so I just have to deal with it.

Attempt at Humor

What happens during the first three years of a marriage?
First year the guy talks and the woman listens
Second year the woman talks and the guy listens
Third year they both talk and the neighbors listens

I wish it was Thursday because I don't feel good today and I just want to go home. There is a COLD going around. Anyways today in class we are still finishing up our first essay because it is due on Monday. For those students who have finished their first one are now starting on their new one. Well see you guys next week, if we (sick people) get better.
Peace out.

September 15, 2010

Today we read Revising and Editing. Then we had to continue our Descriptive Essay. I'm starting with my Informative Essay. I'm so happy because I picked an easy topic so I'm not having a hard time with it, hopefully I'll finish it on Friday. Also today I saw my Written Test REsult, yeay I passed. I can finally practice my driving.

final editting

almost finish

Monday, September 13, 2010

continuing our essays

I am writing about military life. It is rough I am sure and I know I will leave out alot, but I will try. I am tired and hungry. It is my daughters 4th birthday today. I enjoyed class .

Another day...another essay

Good evening. Nice to see people back in class, even though I don't know much of you guys, nonetheless nice to see you guys. Today we went over some stuff about writing. We took turns reading out loud so everyone can hear. After reading out loud, some of us finished our first essay (good luck to you guys out there, don't give up and keep editing) while the rest of us began to write on our informative essay. Mine is about how music affects my life. I constantly listen to music 24/8, so I figured the essay would be easier to write since I have so much experience with the subject. I'm not really feeling way right now, so no jokes and stuff. I'm feeling tired too, so no more typing now.

Day 7: Writer's block...

Good evening everyone! How was your weekend? I hope you guys had a good one, like I did =D. Well anyways about today, we are starting on our informative essay and I don't know if I am lazy or just having writer's block. I can't seem to get started. I know that we just read up on thesis statements and controlling ideas, but nothing comes to mind. I have my topic (sort of), I think it just might be my thesis statement I think I am putting too much thought into it. It is 9:03 pm class is almost and all I have to show for is my name, date, subject, and teacher's name. Dang I hope I start soon. I just want to get it out of the way so I won't be drowning in homework... Later, peace out and be safe. Oh hay!
Today we do the same things we been doing like reading from the blog, but our teacher was go over the "Writing the Controlling Idea/Organizing and Developing Support" section. She did assign each paragraph to each student and they read it out loud to class, after that we continue to work on our first essay.

September 13,2010

Today we read "Writing the Controlling Idea/Organizing and Developing Support", it talks about thesis statements. I'm kind a tired because I had work today, but it's alright I'm finish with my Descriptive Essay. For my Informative Essay I picked the topic about "Racism" hope that's a good and unique topic. I might start writing it tomorrow if facebook let's me hehe.
Hey everyone, I just finished writing my 2nd essay on "Why Teens Wear Makeup" [woot woot] all I need to do now is re-read it before I have a peer review [I'm embaress to show them. i know I'm weird, I get that a lot. ]
Well anyways, today I'm not feeling so well. My head is hurting and the weather is terrible.[sob sob] Well, in class we just talked about "Writing the Controlling Idea/Organizing and Developing Support."After that, everyone just started to work on finishing their draft and working on a new essay, which is informative/ expository essay.

Happy Moday

Happy Monday to everyone, how are you guys(and ladies) doing today? Well if you were here or not, today we read as a class Thesis Statement and Controlling Idea. Now I have a general idea as to how your thesis statement should be written. Then now some of us are doing the first step of our second essay and the others are finishing the first one. For my second essay which is an informative essay, I am going to write about Basic Training for the Army Infantry. I chose this because I have a lot of knowledge about this. So now I am just free writing and then later I will begin writing my essay. That is all for today folks, I will see you ladies and gentlemen next class.
Peace out

final I'm early in class

i just need to finish the final editing of my essay ^^,

Wednesday, September 8, 2010

Missed Class

Hey!
I missed class last night. Don't really feel good about it. However, I did go over the Run-on sentence paper. Also, I am posting a blog. Hope Dr. Rivera excuses me for last night.

Another day, another dollar.

Good evening ladies and gentlemen, it's time for my Mon/Wed class daily blog post. Today there were only like 6? of us (I'm too lazy to count), I don't know why half of our class wasn't here. Whatever. Today we went to our blog (yay) and talked about run on sentences. Run on sentences occur frequently in daily writing because most of us write like how we talk in which we don't completely stop but we do pause to change our tone so people can understand how we speak but it necessarily go well in writing because all your doing is going on and on in your sentence likes it's one big sentence, thus it's called a run on sentence (if you didn't get that, you didn't pay attention today) After that, I finished editing my edited essay and turned it in. We are about to start on a new essay and I picked "How music affects my life." I think it's going to be simple because music is a must in my life. Thats about it, class is going to be over in like 3, 2 minutes. I will see you guys Monday. Peace and remember: DON'T STOP BELIEVEING!!

catching up with my essay

Today we went over run-on sentences. Then we got our folders, so we can continue with our essays. I still didn't finish it, but hopefully I will very soon!

September 8, 2010

Today we read the information about run on sentences. Then we had to revise our Descriptive Essays. Gladly I'm finish with mine ever since last week, I tried to attach my work on my email so I can send it to Dr, Rivera, but it doesn't wanna work. I guess I have to wait until I get home. So stressful.....

Finally

Today in class I finally sent my descriptive essay to Dr. Rivera and now I'm just waiting for her to edit it. For now I'm brain storming my topic for my new essay so that I can be ahead for a while. What should I write about this time, maybe I'll think of something when I'm at home, alone tonight. Anyhow, how is every one doing today, as for me I'm doing okay. A lot of people are not here today, well till next time I write again.
Peace out

Day 6

Hello everyone! I know that I said in my last blog that I would tell you my grade for my descriptive essay. Unfortunately ladies and gents I was unable to receive a grade. Don't know what that means, but for now I'll just leave it to that. If Ms. Rivera has questions about why I have no grade then I'll probably act like a douche and say "I don't know, you tell me" or any wise comment (I say this now, but most likely I would say it in my head, not out loud haha). Anyways I guess from what crystal says I'm done with my descriptive and now it's time to move on to informative essay's. Oh boy! I can't wait to figure out on what I would write about, but I guess you would have to wait until time. Later, peace out, and be safe. Oh hay!

Essay essay essay

I'm starting on my new essay, informative/expository (woot woot) EXCITED! [ah aha Not really.] I don't like writing essay, it's my weakness. Well, I prefer Correcting it's better then writing well that's for me. That's what I know and think of right now. aha aha. Well, My essay is going to be about "Why Teenagers Wear Makeup". I picked this topic because I wear makeup and I know how I feel about it. I know whats behind it all the makeup. ah aha.

sept 8 2010

Where gonna make our second essay, hopefully it wont be so hard ^^,

expository essay

I cant decide on a topic for an expository essay. I have it narrowed down , but i cant decide which to go with. I either want to write about being a military life and family the hardship, teenage pregnancy and how it affects their lives. I really dont know which to choose because both hit home on an emotional basis. I dont know. Help

In an ealier class

Well sorry to my 8 oclock classmates but its my moms bday and i want to take her to dinner. I am excited. I have finished my essay

Wednesday, September 1, 2010

Class is over and I am trying to write in our class blog. Took too much time on revising my essay. See you guys next week.

bummed

I missed class on Monday because my two younger children were sick and I had to care for them.

Today, we reviewed common mistakes and continued on our descriptive essays and i'm actually bummed because i've lost my train of thought. I know what i will be doing over the weekend which is working on this essay.

Rainy day

Today is our first day of the month of september and the weather is so bad for me, because I don't like rainy day during the school days. In my class today we go over the Common Mistakes in Writing in class, our teacher was asked each student to read out loud each section of the common mistakes in writing page and I enjoy it because I just learn someting new today.

My second day in class..

Today was my second day in class, because I've been absent. I learned about common mistakes in writing, how to use commas, what words not to combine, and the difference between words like bad and badly. I also saw an old friend who didn't want to participate with reading out loud hehe.