Sorry I didn't attend class yesterday. Like I said in my other blog that I had a rehearsal to attend.
So what happen in class when I was their? Hope I didn't miss anything.

Finally I found a topic

I finally made up my mind about my second essay topic. It's about a beer bong, not that I do this sort of thing everyday but, It's what I chose.

Yeah

Today I reviewed my sample Sert test believe it or not I scored an 84% which is passing however I have taken and passed the Sert test before therefore I don't need to take it anymore. Lucky me!
I also continued working on my essay #2 and believe it or not today was one of my best days I actually got a lot done compared to other days. However, I must continue and finalize before I do peer editing and submit a final paper. I hope my eagerness continues.

Essay number Two

I think my essay is going to super long. I am doing an essay on the Seven Wonders of the Ancient World. I don't know for some reason I have always been facinated by Greek and Egypt. I love to learn about their history. So any way I am only writing about the first location of the seven and it is already a page. I think I will have to pick one and write all about that.

Redo? Uh oh spaghetti o's

Hey guys. Good evening. Today was pretty laid back. I got my email from Dr. River saying I HAVE TO REDO MY ESSAY. It was a bummer, but thats life. You just have to learn from your mistakes and be a better person, or a better essay. I know that sounds cliche, but it is true (which is also cliche). We also brought our editorials in class today, I bought an old PDN and shared the second half of that to Rod, who is my good friend since we were 5. Bad choice. Looking at my first half of the editorial, I saw that the article was in chamorro. Chamorro. I mean I took chamorro classes since I was in elementary but nothing could prepare me for that. I do wish I understand Chamorro so I can read the article, luckily there was a second article on the left side of that page about the liberation day parade and how to be safe on that day. That is about it, my day off is tomorrow and I'm going to the mall for my class so it doesn't get any better than that. Hope yall take care and have a safe night and my arms and fingers are starting to sore from all the typing I've done today. I think this is the most typing I've done in a long, long, long time. Okay, I need to stop typing or else it's going to be sore sore. Yeah I'm goin to stop any moment. Like right about no

Tonight in class.

I have to write another informative essay. I am fine with that because I really enjoy writing. I hope this topic is easier for me to finish this essay in a timely fashion. I am researching the information and I am actually studying about the topic in another class. We went over editorials this evening and we have to write one for next week. I have some homework ahead of me. I hope everyone is doing well on their essays. Good luck with finishing everything for next week.

Another day

Today and yet again I was late hehe and I was just sitting outside the whole time. I brought in a newspaper so I can work on my editoral, but I decided to work on my second essay instead, because Dr. Rivera says we can have the weekend to do it.

Day 11 and 12

Day 11:
Oh hay! just finished my 2nd draft informative paper now all I got to do is wait for the teacher to edit it and finish my informative paper. Oh that was one problem off my shoulder's, I am slowly catching up ^_^. Well anyways I am doing okay in the class just like everyone else. I was glad when I found out my progress now I just need to keep it up and hopefully pass this course.

Day 12:
Reading the editorial was okay. Thanks to Batman the article he gave me really caught my attention. The article talks about Steven LeFever, resident of Dededo. His topic " Alcohol laws hurt nightlife culture", being nineteen I enjoy being in the clubs or bar having nice cold beer after a hard day from work. Unfortunately with the new drinking law I can't have those moments again unless I'm at a friends house who is twenty-one year old. It's nice to drink at a friend's house too, but I prefer being out there meeting new people as I am with my friends. I am what you call "a safe driver", before the the transition of the new law I would always make sure that I had designated driver or I was sober enough to drive my friend's home. Not saying that the new law is unfair or anything it's just reading this article made me think, what if the law was passed two years ago? Would the tragic accident of Ramon Oberiano, a nineteen year boy still happen today? Would he be sober while driving? Not only that the new law has change the lifestyle of others, but what's going to happen to the alcohol-serving businesses? So far from what I know The Venue, Club/bar lounge in Maite was recently closed down, what's next denials? after 5? Well I don't know what's going to happen next but until next time everyone have a good weekend and be safe.

Northern Light

The title of my second essay is actually the seven wonders of the world.
But, I'm actually just learning about it. So if you guys know something about it that I
might not know yet, give me the heads up.

September 29, 2010

Today we began class with a discussion on how to do our editorial assignment. I'm so glad that Dr. Rivera gave us an extension because my mind is blank. Anyhow, I'm currently waiting for my peer review for my 2nd essay, in the meantime I'm going to try to figure out what my topic will be for my 3rd essay. Wish me luck.

September 29,2010

Today we had to bring our Editorial Paper, which I totally forgot. I'm not even done with my "Informative Essay", I really want it detailed so it's taking me time to finish. Our editorial and informative essay are due Wednesday, I got to hurry. I'm so frustrated because all of my class have homework, especially my Math Class. That's why I got to stay up late to try to finish all my homework...

change topic

I need to change my topic because I'm having a hard time on my last topic T.T

We have a teacher and student conference today, our teacher was talk to each of the student and shows them where they stand and how well they did on the test, she also encourages them. She told the class that the final will be in 45 minutes and no peer review.

I am scatter brained tonight

I just posted a blog and completely forgot to talk about our one on one conference with Dr. Rivera. I did enjoy the feedback on how I am doing in the class. It is a positive outlook as far as this class goes. I did not do as well as I anticipated on the sert test. I was a little surprised because it seemed to be so simple. Well good night again.

Continuing my narrative essay.

I am really finding this essay to be my most challenging. My family was always on the wild side and trying to describe it in a narrative fashion is not coming to me very easy. There is much to include in a small paper, but I am up for the challenge. I had a really productice day today, and i hope it continues throughout the week. I look forward to class every week. It is my brief chance to be Heidi and not mom for a few hours. I enjoy every minute but miss them at the same time. I am rambling, and wont bore you any longer. I took B-12 this morning. I highly recommend it for natural energy. Have a wonderful night and I will see everyone on Wednesday.

Monkeys in a Treebar.

Yeah I thought my title would catch you guys. Good evening fellow classmates/bloggers. Today was our one-to-one conference. She talked to us one by one and explain progress. I was doing okay in here class, which was good. I just need to keep practice my essays because I'm still not that good. I just finished emailing my second essay to her, waiting for a editted version of my paper so i can turn in my final paper and yeah. Hope all yall are doing all right. Peace

Back to Class

Hey!
I'm back to class with nothing but a blank brain on what to do for my Informative essay. I think I have to many options and my mind can't decide. I need to narrow it down.
Any way it feels good to be back. I hope to have a decision before class ends.

Well, I was the second person that had a teacher-student conference. Well, my problem for this class in order for me to pass is my SERT! ahhhh I don't like that test, well I don't have much of a choice but to take it to move on from this level of English.
Other then the teacher-student conference, I'm still searching for the right topic for my narrative essay, this is taking longer than I thought, but hopefully I find the right one soon.

By the way, I won't be in class on Wednesday, September 29,2010 for I have a Tech & Dress Rehearsal for a Dance Company this Saturday, October 02, 2010. This is going to be my last concert. If you would like to attend or watch its going to be at Mercy Heights (Sister Riberta). Theirs a 2pm show and a 7:30pm or 7pm (not so sure for the night show) show.
Well, I'm just letting everyone know that I won't be here.
Update me on what happen on Wednesday class meeting.
Thanks. :)

Just Starting

Just starting on my second essay. This class is going by fast or i'm just slacking , but I got to
get my act together if I want to pass this class. I wonder if i'm up for the pressure.

September 27, 2010

Unfortunately I was not able to attend last class session because of my job. Fortunately I was able to complete my first draft of my second essay and print it out for peer review. Hopefully, there are not a lot of revisions to be made.

September 27, 2010

I didn't go Class last class, because I was kind a sick. Today I still have to finish my Informative Essay, it's so frustrating. Hopefully I might finish it this Sunday. I just came from work so I'm exhausted and I'm still sick, but I got to do my essay to get a good grade. Dr. Rivera will call me soon for a C0nference, got to get ready....

i just finish my essay

^^, finally I've finally finish my essay I just need to edit my essay..

Day 9 and 10

Well here's a quick summary of what went on Monday. I came to class dropped off crystal's paper with my corrections. Then I left early, reason for that is I'm a 19 year old college student with no car and depends on friends for transportation. So basically one friend of mine couldn't drop me home so asking another friend in the school he gets out at 8:30 and that was my only option.

As for today I'm so behind in my paper. Anyways I'll be lying when I say I'm almost done. So Lets just say I'm half way there... -_-" fail! Hopefully I'll get over my procrastination and finish up my paper and get back on track. Well that's all for now everyone have a good weekend and be safe.

Today I received revisions for my descriptive essay from Dr. Rivera. Because I was eager to get paper #1 done with I came into class early and got started. After completing paper 1 I continued to do my research for paper #2 and changed up my topic focusing in on the Head Start program. But as usual because of the time and it being a long day I am experiancing a BRAIN FART so now I know how i'll be spending my weekend. So until next week you all have a great weekend. Adios amigos

No Idea

Should I my narrative essay be " No Idea"? Because I don't have any clue on what to write. Rod said it's original. I forgot what he said but anyways. HELP!

Second Essay: Completed!!!Exclamation mark

Good evening ladies and gentleman and ladiegentlemens. Today was an okay day here at my 100w class. We went straight to our computers and continue working on our essay. Today I finished my essay (WOOT!!!). I deserve some cake or something. Informative essay are not my strong areas, I'm usually the narrative essay type of guy, which will come in handy because that is the third type of essay we are set to do. So narrative essay, beware because I'm coming to get you. That sounded weird and stalkerish. Oh well. I hope everyone is having at least an okay time with their essays. Thats about it. I will post up again in Monday. "Peace out, A-town." -Usher

contest

So is anyone going to write a short story for the contest?

I finished writing my informative essay, I'm just waiting for Dr. Rivera to send me the revised one. Other than that, ugh I can't seems to have any topic to start my narrative. It's giving my a headache just trying to find one. My life isn't that exciting from my point-of-view. Epic Fail for me. I need to think of one quick so I can start. Well, anyways got to go now still need to find a topic to write about for the next essay.

All finished with my essay.

I am finished with my essay. I am having a hard time choosing the next topic. My life has been a whirl wind . How do you narrow it down? I will have to give it lots of thought. I want to write about growing up in New Orleans , but that could go on forever as an essay.

Today we schedule to continue work on our second essay; we also do the same things we been doing like posting on the student blog and sending comment to other. For me I just start on my second essay and I been thinking if I can make it to the death line for the first draft.

Think, think, think.....

Hello again my EN 100W friends, whats good in the hood? Just been working on Informative Essay and stuff. Whats you guys and ladies been doing? It's hard to think when your mind is somewhere else, wait it is impossible to do that, or is it? (Thinks for a few seconds) I don't know because I can't think right now. Looks like people are missing in the class today huh? Man this is a lot of questions that I'm asking you guys. You don't have to answer any not that you were going to anyways.(laughing) But that will be all for the day see you people next week(You people, what do you mean "you people")

peace out

second essay

I'm running out of idea on what to wright. T.T
hopefully I finish my essay today.

Starting my new essay.

Well I was pretty much finished and then I lost my flash drive. I did have my rough draft so I just retyped it. I added more information which I wanted to in the first place. Class flew by I didnt even realize the time .

This is the day we are going to turn in our first draft of our first essay, and we started the second essay.

Today I was a little late for class! So I sat down thinking about my second topic for my next essay. I'm not to sure if I want to do the topic that I thought of.

Research....

Today, I choose my informative essay topic and started on my research regarding my topic on Early Childhood Education as I waited for my essay paper #1 to be proof read by Dr. Rivera. I choose to write my essay #2 on early childhood education because of my profession as a Head Start Teachers aide and because I can relate well with the topic. I've started on my outline and will continue to do some researching and gathering of information. Well good night and see you all Wednesday.

Hey everyone, just finish writing my essay again. I had to do it all over again. cause of the mistakes, well I'm going to ask rod to re-check my work before I send it to Dr. Rivera, so almost done. Well today we just went straight to working our essay. The first essay is due today, so gets does essay in. Beside the the first paper being due, we worked on our second essay.

sick..

I went to school sick, so I couldn't really concentrate much. i did my last paragraph and read the e-mails Dr. Matilda sent me and thats about it. oh Vince got me tissue for my running nose hehe so thanks Vince.

One essay down, one more to go

Hey guys. How are you? Me? I'm doing good, I'm kind of tired, but I'm still alive so that's always good. Why I my talking like there's another person in here talking to me? I don't know. So today was pretty basic. We went online and just finished our first essay, which is due today. Thank God I finished mine ever since that one day. Now we are tasked with doing an informative essay and I could tell you mine is doing okay. I'm halfway done, so another halfway done to go. That's about it, I will see you guys on Wednesday. Drive safe, or if your not driving, walk safe, or if your not walking, fly safe.

September 20, 2010

Today is the final day to turn-in our first essay. I am currently waiting for my peer review from my partner so I can make any revisions if needed. In the meantime, I thought I'd work on posting my blog entry for this evening before I forget. Fortunately, I was able to decide on a topic for my second essay and inform Dr. Rivera this evening. I certainly hope you guys don't find it boring, it's on "Egyptian Mummification".

September 20, 2010

Today we just have to finish our Descriptive Essay. But for me I just need to finish my Informative Essay. I'm so exhausted because I had work today, but it's alright because I had a good meal with my family. And I'm so happy because I passed my BLS Class For Healthcare Provider (CPR). Now I kind a know hOw to do CPR on Adults and Infants and save people who are choking:)!

Better Late Than Never

My first time blogging, don't know what to expect out of this but I think this
is a class requirement and i need all the point's i can get to pass this class plus i think
it a cool way to chat with someone next to you and not even talk.

vision

I'm having a little research for my topic it's kinda hard working on my essay with out any information about it

Had to misss class due to family emergency

My brother who is 16 had to have surgery . Warning for guys testitical contorsion is painful and deadly. I have guardianship of him and had to take him to the er and they had to do an immediate surgery. Sorry for missing class. I hope this is a viable excuse.

Day off tomorrow....school tomorrow uggh

Hey guys. Its me again. Today we went online using these magical equipment called a "computer" and went to something called a "blog" and read Revising and Editing. It was about revising and editing your essay (duh, what where you expecting, donuts?). After reading that, we resume on our essays, whether it was essay #1 or essay #2 (in which I am doing right now, shabooyah). As you can tell I'm in a pretty good mood, I don't know why, it might because I know I'm going to get some sleep tonight. Sleep is like a gift from the Gods to me these days, heck I would love sleep to be one of my present for Christmas or Kwanzaa, whichever my family celebrates this year. That's about it for today, everyone is cool and please COMMENT ON MY BLOG PLEASE!! I'm in dire need of attention because of my self-esteem level is down :( hehe peace2

-Batman

HELLO =]

Hey girl hey! [ah aha.] just kidding. Well, I re-edited my 2nd essay. Finally finish just waiting for MR. OH HaY! a.k.a ROD! [bleh bleh] to do the finishing touches, then I have to re-re-edit it again and then send it to Dr. Rivera. Oh Gad, that sound like a long process but it isn't all I have to do to is wait and wait.[eheheh] Well other then that the class read about revising and editing and then went straight to our essay. Well anyways, I'm going to start commenting peoples blogs

Bye bye for now till next time... SMiLE :D

Not content... need some help

Today, I continued to work on paper #1. Not content if it is what is expected of a descriptive paper I guess that is why i've had to repeat this class once too many times. Looking around to see who I can bother to do peer editing but everybody is busy at work so i decided to post blog.

oops.... Sorry

Was looking just now for my last post and couldn't find it. I think i forgot to hit the publish post button because i was in such a hurry last class time. Anyhow, if i remember clearly i wrote about how sorry i was that i missed last Wednesday's class because i had come down with some kind of sickness and was not feeling well. However, while i was out i did get a chance to work on my essay.

September 15, 2010

Today we discussed Revising and Editing an essay. We each took turns reading aloud a section of the Revising and Editing an essay portion. I was happy that I was able to complete my first essay and had given it to my partner, Jovana for peer editing. Hopefully, she doesn't need to do alot.

September 15

Today we went over Revising and Editing. I came a little late to class so the class was already done reading it. But, I got to read a little bit of it cause when i sat down it was already my turn. After, we had to finish our final draft. I ended up finishing it cause I just had to write a conclusion. Our other assignment was to write another essay, which I'm not looking foward to really. But, its out assignment so I just have to deal with it.

Attempt at Humor

What happens during the first three years of a marriage?
First year the guy talks and the woman listens
Second year the woman talks and the guy listens
Third year they both talk and the neighbors listens

I wish it was Thursday because I don't feel good today and I just want to go home. There is a COLD going around. Anyways today in class we are still finishing up our first essay because it is due on Monday. For those students who have finished their first one are now starting on their new one. Well see you guys next week, if we (sick people) get better.
Peace out.

September 15, 2010

Today we read Revising and Editing. Then we had to continue our Descriptive Essay. I'm starting with my Informative Essay. I'm so happy because I picked an easy topic so I'm not having a hard time with it, hopefully I'll finish it on Friday. Also today I saw my Written Test REsult, yeay I passed. I can finally practice my driving.

final editting

almost finish

continuing our essays

I am writing about military life. It is rough I am sure and I know I will leave out alot, but I will try. I am tired and hungry. It is my daughters 4th birthday today. I enjoyed class .

Another day...another essay

Good evening. Nice to see people back in class, even though I don't know much of you guys, nonetheless nice to see you guys. Today we went over some stuff about writing. We took turns reading out loud so everyone can hear. After reading out loud, some of us finished our first essay (good luck to you guys out there, don't give up and keep editing) while the rest of us began to write on our informative essay. Mine is about how music affects my life. I constantly listen to music 24/8, so I figured the essay would be easier to write since I have so much experience with the subject. I'm not really feeling way right now, so no jokes and stuff. I'm feeling tired too, so no more typing now.

Day 7: Writer's block...

Good evening everyone! How was your weekend? I hope you guys had a good one, like I did =D. Well anyways about today, we are starting on our informative essay and I don't know if I am lazy or just having writer's block. I can't seem to get started. I know that we just read up on thesis statements and controlling ideas, but nothing comes to mind. I have my topic (sort of), I think it just might be my thesis statement I think I am putting too much thought into it. It is 9:03 pm class is almost and all I have to show for is my name, date, subject, and teacher's name. Dang I hope I start soon. I just want to get it out of the way so I won't be drowning in homework... Later, peace out and be safe. Oh hay!

Today we do the same things we been doing like reading from the blog, but our teacher was go over the "Writing the Controlling Idea/Organizing and Developing Support" section. She did assign each paragraph to each student and they read it out loud to class, after that we continue to work on our first essay.

September 13,2010

Today we read "Writing the Controlling Idea/Organizing and Developing Support", it talks about thesis statements. I'm kind a tired because I had work today, but it's alright I'm finish with my Descriptive Essay. For my Informative Essay I picked the topic about "Racism" hope that's a good and unique topic. I might start writing it tomorrow if facebook let's me hehe.

Hey everyone, I just finished writing my 2nd essay on "Why Teens Wear Makeup" [woot woot] all I need to do now is re-read it before I have a peer review [I'm embaress to show them. i know I'm weird, I get that a lot. ]
Well anyways, today I'm not feeling so well. My head is hurting and the weather is terrible.[sob sob] Well, in class we just talked about "Writing the Controlling Idea/Organizing and Developing Support."After that, everyone just started to work on finishing their draft and working on a new essay, which is informative/ expository essay.

Happy Moday

Happy Monday to everyone, how are you guys(and ladies) doing today? Well if you were here or not, today we read as a class Thesis Statement and Controlling Idea. Now I have a general idea as to how your thesis statement should be written. Then now some of us are doing the first step of our second essay and the others are finishing the first one. For my second essay which is an informative essay, I am going to write about Basic Training for the Army Infantry. I chose this because I have a lot of knowledge about this. So now I am just free writing and then later I will begin writing my essay. That is all for today folks, I will see you ladies and gentlemen next class.
Peace out

final I'm early in class

i just need to finish the final editing of my essay ^^,

Missed Class

Hey!
I missed class last night. Don't really feel good about it. However, I did go over the Run-on sentence paper. Also, I am posting a blog. Hope Dr. Rivera excuses me for last night.

Another day, another dollar.

Good evening ladies and gentlemen, it's time for my Mon/Wed class daily blog post. Today there were only like 6? of us (I'm too lazy to count), I don't know why half of our class wasn't here. Whatever. Today we went to our blog (yay) and talked about run on sentences. Run on sentences occur frequently in daily writing because most of us write like how we talk in which we don't completely stop but we do pause to change our tone so people can understand how we speak but it necessarily go well in writing because all your doing is going on and on in your sentence likes it's one big sentence, thus it's called a run on sentence (if you didn't get that, you didn't pay attention today) After that, I finished editing my edited essay and turned it in. We are about to start on a new essay and I picked "How music affects my life." I think it's going to be simple because music is a must in my life. Thats about it, class is going to be over in like 3, 2 minutes. I will see you guys Monday. Peace and remember: DON'T STOP BELIEVEING!!

catching up with my essay

Today we went over run-on sentences. Then we got our folders, so we can continue with our essays. I still didn't finish it, but hopefully I will very soon!

September 8, 2010

Today we read the information about run on sentences. Then we had to revise our Descriptive Essays. Gladly I'm finish with mine ever since last week, I tried to attach my work on my email so I can send it to Dr, Rivera, but it doesn't wanna work. I guess I have to wait until I get home. So stressful.....

Finally

Today in class I finally sent my descriptive essay to Dr. Rivera and now I'm just waiting for her to edit it. For now I'm brain storming my topic for my new essay so that I can be ahead for a while. What should I write about this time, maybe I'll think of something when I'm at home, alone tonight. Anyhow, how is every one doing today, as for me I'm doing okay. A lot of people are not here today, well till next time I write again.
Peace out

Day 6

Hello everyone! I know that I said in my last blog that I would tell you my grade for my descriptive essay. Unfortunately ladies and gents I was unable to receive a grade. Don't know what that means, but for now I'll just leave it to that. If Ms. Rivera has questions about why I have no grade then I'll probably act like a douche and say "I don't know, you tell me" or any wise comment (I say this now, but most likely I would say it in my head, not out loud haha). Anyways I guess from what crystal says I'm done with my descriptive and now it's time to move on to informative essay's. Oh boy! I can't wait to figure out on what I would write about, but I guess you would have to wait until time. Later, peace out, and be safe. Oh hay!

Essay essay essay

I'm starting on my new essay, informative/expository (woot woot) EXCITED! [ah aha Not really.] I don't like writing essay, it's my weakness. Well, I prefer Correcting it's better then writing well that's for me. That's what I know and think of right now. aha aha. Well, My essay is going to be about "Why Teenagers Wear Makeup". I picked this topic because I wear makeup and I know how I feel about it. I know whats behind it all the makeup. ah aha.

sept 8 2010

Where gonna make our second essay, hopefully it wont be so hard ^^,

expository essay

I cant decide on a topic for an expository essay. I have it narrowed down , but i cant decide which to go with. I either want to write about being a military life and family the hardship, teenage pregnancy and how it affects their lives. I really dont know which to choose because both hit home on an emotional basis. I dont know. Help

In an ealier class

Well sorry to my 8 oclock classmates but its my moms bday and i want to take her to dinner. I am excited. I have finished my essay

Class is over and I am trying to write in our class blog. Took too much time on revising my essay. See you guys next week.

bummed

I missed class on Monday because my two younger children were sick and I had to care for them.

Today, we reviewed common mistakes and continued on our descriptive essays and i'm actually bummed because i've lost my train of thought. I know what i will be doing over the weekend which is working on this essay.

Rainy day

Today is our first day of the month of september and the weather is so bad for me, because I don't like rainy day during the school days. In my class today we go over the Common Mistakes in Writing in class, our teacher was asked each student to read out loud each section of the common mistakes in writing page and I enjoy it because I just learn someting new today.

My second day in class..

Today was my second day in class, because I've been absent. I learned about common mistakes in writing, how to use commas, what words not to combine, and the difference between words like bad and badly. I also saw an old friend who didn't want to participate with reading out loud hehe.

5th Day

Fifth day of class. Wow I just did a sentence fragment there and thats a no no. It's been raining all week and it's very depressing and today was no different (too much ands in this sentence). We went online and to our blogs. We then proceeded to read some stuff about mistkaes in grammar. It was actually pretty enlightening because I actually learned a thing or two from it (in which I would probably forget after 30 minutes). I was done editing my essay so I send it to her and now I am awaiting my revised essay from her. While I'm waiting I'm writing this post so yeah. By the way, how do you guys put pictures up in your post? You guys who do that are so technologically literate. Good job. Bad job for me. (two sentence fragments there)

September 1, 2010

Today we got our essays back from Dr. Rivera. I know Ididnt do to well on writing it the proper way. But, when i got my essay, I was surprised how bad I did. I didn't think I would do that bad on my essay. But it did show me what i needed to work on. Also, we went over Common Mistakes In Writing. It made me understand more about grammar. I didn't know how important grammar was until I took this class. Hopefully I can learn more and faster.

No School Moday

What there is no school Monday! I really was looking forward to it(laughing out loud), anyhow today the class went over some common writing mistakes. I learned some words that I used in the past were either used wrong or just wrong. Everyone but one guy read out loud. I guess the guy didn't feel like reading. Then we continued editing and writing our essays, maybe I'll be done by next week I hope.

1st week of sept

Today we read about common mistakes in grammar and it help me a little bit in my essay because I'm not really good in righting essays and short story and stuff like that (T.T)

September 1, 2010

Today we read Common Mistakes of English Grammar, Mechanics, and Punctuation and Common Mistakes and Tricky Choices. It was interesting because it tells us what mistakes people often do
on their essays. After that we had to continue with our Descriptive essays. I'm so happy because I'm done with it.

Gosh, I hate the weather, it's killing!

Killing me softly with this WEATHER!
[not part of the song, but yeah.]

I'm was having a headache earlier, but its going away.

I been having headaches lately, I guess ever since I started my EN100R(reading) I got addicted to reading that I barely have enough sleep.

Well, I just edited my essay that Dr. Rivera revise.
Their wasn't that much mistake that I thought their will be.

Day 5

It was a dark and not so stormy night. As I enter the classroom pondering what we will be doing this evening. I see Ms. Rivera sitting her seat preparing for the next class. Walking towards her she greets me, " Hello, Rod" she says. She then hands me the sign in sheet and tells me to get my folder from the stack of other red folders in front of me. As I sat in my seat breaking the rules by going on facebook I wait for class to begin. While I was in a deep facebook chat with a few friends I hear the door open, footsteps coming my way, and a voice close by. " Hey Rod! ", she says, with confusion on my face I turn to see it was my computer neighbor and friend Crystal. We chatted for a while then 9' o clock came. Paying attention to the class read out loud the common mistakes sheet, I became distracted by finishing up my essay and transfering it to my new flash drive. Now I sit here about to start on my final draft. I hope for the best now that it has been revised by Ms. Rivera. Maybe in my next blog I will tell you what I got for my grade...

Wed before class

Wow, I am so tired. I slept all day with my sick daughter. I think I ate too much before I came into class. I am writing before class starts because I dont have anyone else to post about. I hope to revise my essay more tonight. It needs alot of work. I did have a good evening . My husband suprised me with a new orchid, a new shirt, amd a calculator. I love the thoughtful gifts. We are still waiting for everyone to show up for class.

Its the 1st of the month.

Today is the 1st of the month and man what a rainy day it is. Today I attended an early class session due to that I have prior engagement for this evening. I actually came to class a little bit early so that way I can get a seat cause I did not know if the class was full or not. As I walked into class I did the same routine which was sign in, get our folder, and log onto our blog. As we waited for six o'clock to hit so that we can start our lesson I actually had time to go over my paper which i did as six o'clock hit we started class as always with clicking on the link she tell us to. Today we read over Common Mistakes in Writing and the first one we read was Common Mistakes of English Grammar, Mechanics, and Punctuations we had to read out loud ones we were done reading that we had a second blog to read which was Common Mistakes and Tricky Choices we then had to read this out loud. Once all the reading out loud was done we then had to work or continue on our descriptive essay. Well since i attended an earlier class session I had someone else go over my descriptive essay paper. I honestly thought my paper was fine, because my partner said it was fine then come to find out my paper is a mess! oh boy!