Monday, August 30, 2010
Continuing Our Descriptive Essay
I have so much to write about that I feel I am leaving out too many details. It is such a hurtful time im life that I dont like to discuss it often. I am writing about almost losing my daughter and how do you describe those emtions in words. I cant seem to find sufficient words. We had to draft our partners work again. I am really not good at this portion of class. I also said before that I have a hard time talking about this issue. So having someone, a stranger, read my personal thoughts and correct them isnt easy. I know I am here to learn to write properly and I chose my topic so no excuses, but I figures I would throw it out there anyways.
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That takes a lot of guts to write about. Kudos to you and I'm sorry about your loss, but life goes and on.
ReplyDeleteI know how you feel, but when I was reading your essay I felt very emotional that my eyes were watery. Other then that I'm glad shes okay now.
ReplyDeleteI give you Two Thumbs UP! It would be three or more but don't have that much of hands. (giggle)
Well anyways, your brave.