CLASS ANNOUNCEMENTS

CLASS ANNOUNCEMENTS

Wednesday, August 25, 2010

Descriptive Essay

Today we went over how to right an essay and choosing a subject to right about. I wrote about one of the most saddest day of my life. The essay had to be a page a long and then when we were done, we had to choose a partner to trade essays so we can edit each others own. I traded with Marla.
Her essay was on point with everything. Honestly, I'm not the best editor in the world. That would probably be a weak point for me in this class. Hope Dr. Rivera can help me with my problem.

3 comments:

  1. Of course she will dork, that is why we have this class.LOL1

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  2. We are in this class because of that reason, just keep coming to class everyday and do your work. Basically thats how any school works.

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  3. I agree I am not the best editor but I also have a hard time taking critisism from peers.

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